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55. Sin. And explosions.

🕑 Added 2020-02-03 15:55:49 +0000 UTC

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Aapjuh

fire at point blank rage. > range

Mecanimus

I was surprised he became more important as well. He was totally unplanned.

Toknightly

While I abhor his acts, the Judge may be my favorite villian of the series so far. He's very well written. I can't wait for our girl to rip his head off.

Anghwrtais

Destroy his credibility. Get him laid, have him bang a guy and get caught, get him drunk and have him wake up nakked surrounded by people... in the town square.

Magnus Branzén

“Of course, of course, say, can vampires get commotions?” Concussions?

Mecanimus

Good catches! Edits made thanks.

carebear90

Street smart? I thought she's like all educated and stuff... ^^ Well, as you asked... I hope it is something nasty but doesn't rely on her identity as a vampire. It should be a good opportunity for a testrun in political savy before the real deal with others of her kind in... 1.5? 1.2? years.

Mecanimus

In five days or so ;)

Mecanimus

Of course you will.

Mecanimus

WARNING MYSTERIOUS DISAPPEARANCES LIMIT EXCEEDED

Mecanimus

But what will our street smart vampire do about it? ;)

carebear90

I'm not sure Naminata is a good influence on our poor Ariane. She's become so reckless. ^^ Not quite sure what to think of the Judges plot. It doesn't seem like this is just racism. More like the racism is an excuse to achieve something else, like... destroying all the "sinful" buisnesses by robbing them of their employees. He is way to smug telling her all about it.

Zachary Smith

Fuck that racist judge, this calls for torture! Get medieval on his ass

Nicholas Paterson

Loved the chapter. Hope we see Bradley again, he was fun. Here are my attempts at editing, enjoy. one of my modest proposal -> one of my modest proposals against using it as a clutch. -> against using it as a crutch. How comes I -> How come I? I must be losin g my -> I must be losing my There is only on thing -> There is only one thing I fond it unlikely. -> I find it unlikely.? We coul look for -> We could look for all manners of tgings -> all manners of things? and with a nod, jump down. -> and with a nod, I jump down. (I think) Hi steely glare -> His steely glare I am no much for -> I am not much for So tell me oh defender of light, why come -> So tell me, oh defender of light, why come (If you want to) people checking wreck -> people checking the wreck? Call it… A professional -> Call it… a professional

Jacob

Thanks for the chapter, now I can't wait to find out what she has in store for the judge

L Pedersen

<3 I loved this chapter, it was great! It felt a lot more episodic than any previous chapter but I have a feeling we'll see bradly again and this is a very nice introduction for him. Kinda wanted to see Sullivan dealt with as well but I'm sure that if I'm patient I'll be rewarded.


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