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70. Painful Hearing

🕑 Added 2020-04-14 04:37:48 +0000 UTC

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Lasne

Thanks for the chapter, this hearing was very cathartic and the way the arguments from the Lancaster were destroyed is well tied with the story so far, it was great.

Mecanimus

It was such a big inspiration that I actually precised that her severed fingers turn to ash, so Ignace doesn't end up with buckets of fingers like that asshole ghoul.

SunderGoldmane

Oh I just want to add that I capitol L O V E the nervous self assessment tick, it is an element that could have been ignored but adds so much with its presence. There’s no way and immortal goes through ritualistic and systematic disfigurement for the first time and not develop this small habit for a bit. It reminds me very much of Tokyo Ghoul and how the main character develops a habit of popping his fingers and counting backwards after his torture encounter.

SunderGoldmane

Magnifique!

Darren Li

WHEEEEEEEEE!!!!!

Mecanimus

I should have studied law.

Mecanimus

Writing Melusine's meltdown was super fun.

Mecanimus

I should have posted both at once for the experience.

Mecanimus

Can you taste the foreshadowing of the next Loth arc?

Mecanimus

She will be done with it when the planet runs out of lemon.

Mecanimus

You're welcome. Having Melusine lash out was fun.

Mecanimus

Yes, and don't worry she is not magically recovered either.

Kevin Caffrey

One minor suggestion/nitpick: I think it would be more consistent with the world building to have the line at the end be “Lords and Lady” instead of “Gentlemen and Lady”. Thus far vampires seem to refer to each other by rank primarily in formal or unfamiliar contexts, rather than by affectations such as “gentleman”.

Kevin Caffrey

Great chapter, very cathartic, especially after the emotional pain of the previous chapter. I look forward to the likely future revenge arc where Ariane absolutely wrecks House Lannister. I doubt she will settle for anything less than Moors head on a stake

Paul Wirtz

I wonder how long it will be before she is done with lemon juice?

tibbish

This chapter was great stuff, thanks authie!!

Allie

Omg I thought the last chapter was great but this is the icing on top for sure~ watching her keep herself together(however long that lasts) felt very relatable tbh :l thanks a million!

Pierre Steiner

I don't completely agree, the Lancaster treatment of Ariane was mingled with contempt, hatred and constant abuse, both physical and psychological, without good reason or cause for more than a year. Constantine's treatment was a power play as was said, and a way of asserting the reliability of Ariane's testimony.

Thorlol

Hmm! It was a great chapter, finally Ariane is 'free' and the Lancasters got rejected in a humiliating way but that was to be expected and also fortelled. But it was also disappointing in a way. After the last chapter I was expecting Ariane to be 'more' out of it. She was more or less fine after only one day of sleep. I kinda expected that it would have more of an impact overall, on her or on others. To be fair, the focus in this chapter was the hearing and it delivered in that regard but except her mantra there was no reaction or emotion, neither outwardly or inwardly. If I had to compare, what Constantine ordered and Ignace executed was in my opinion worse and life-changing than the treatment of the Lancasters and that was already enough for a deep seated hatred. So yeah, in relation to this chapter it feels like the prior chapter was senseless and without lasting consequences for anyone. This may or may not change in the future chapters but I expected 'something' to come out of it. Nevertheless, great chapter and Im looking forward to future chapters!

Aapjuh

king loth... haha

Jed Wolfgang

This chapter was damn near cathartic following the previous one. The revenge arc will be sweet, I hope.

How awsome! Laughed several times!😂

Garbled Sounds

Finally! This was a great "trial" chapter. Nicely set up and not unnecessarily dragged out.

Mecanimus

Thanks for taking the time, and for the support.

Mecanimus

Opinions are divided apparently.

Mecanimus

Not for the same reason I bet

Mecanimus

Redemption arc ;)

Mecanimus

OBJECTION

Mecanimus

Glad to entertain =D

volpol

This is great. I must say I enjoy this novel immensely. Enough to make me comment which I actually never do :) Thanks so much for writing this!

Bloodorange17

These last 2 chapters have been some of the best in the series thus far imo

DaQualyn Singleton

These last two chapters made me cry

TheLunaticCo

I loved it.

Seri

Melusine is a doll and I love her.

Xtriver

Ooooh finally! =)

Mani

Yesssss!! I love a fun courtroom battle Thx for the chapter

Couldn’t stop laughing at the end


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