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73. Mise en Abyme

🕑 Added 2020-04-29 03:35:10 +0000 UTC

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Mecanimus

Hmm. you are right. And thanks for the support.

K Hilliard

Loving this story, decided I’d Patreon up this month and read ahead. Last bit of dialogue, The speaker isn’t clear to me. It’s her revelation, but it seems more likely it would be him calling her “my dear.”

Mecanimus

And so it is done. 74 is up ;).

Rondel

Caught the story on RR and then jumped the wagon to catch up. Absolute delight, thanks and keep 'em coming!

Mecanimus

The sad thing is that I really struggle to write any faster than this.

Zir

you need a patreon for your patreon so i can skip ahead another 14 chapters

Mecanimus

Here is fine, and edits made.

Mecanimus

I'm so chuffed that you like it. I will do my best to maintain the level of quality.

Blake

I'm not sure if you like corrections being posted here, but i found two errors while rereading the chapter. "Conservative busybodies could stare with disapproval for hours without ever being to pinpoint exactly where I cross the line." should be, 'being ABLE to' "Eventually, the diva herself closes the door behind her, takes a deep, exhausted sight and turns to find her sanctum desecrated by a troublesome trio." SIGH not sight

Pierre Steiner

Absolutely fantastic chapter, I love it I love it I love it! Extremely well balanced, concise yet powerful depictions, you really brought me in another world with this one. I would like to point out that the introduction of this Bingle arc 2.0 was extremely well brought forward, while building up the world a little bit more, on many aspects! Great, great chapter Mecanimus! Thank you :3

Malir Blackspear

"... slamming the door close behind him" not that "close" definitely isn't correct, but "closed" seems to fit more there imo.

Mecanimus

Patreon fucking with my fromatting again.

Mecanimus

Good catch I'm editing now.

andy may phan

Great chapter! "for safekeeping" appears twice in the same sentence.

Jacob A Smith

Good chapter. I got a little confused about the transition from the talk with the urchin to her talking about her dress for the opera.

Garbled Sounds

Vampire plots thicken. I like it!

Mecanimus

Good catch. Edit made for godling. For the comma I'm not so sure so I'll ask a pro.

Love the chapter

Darren Li

The plot thickens...

Randee

Oooh, how exciting! Thank you for the chapter. Here are some typos that I caught. "As you have surmised, powerful emotions are something we crave and the goldlings cause them by their very existence." Goldling should be godling. "My name is Bingle, and these are my friends Ariane and Torran." A comma should be put after the word friends.

Mecanimus

Mise en abyme means having a story within a story. This chapter has many of those, I am glad you enjoyed it.

Mecanimus

Excellent, I was aiming for that and also hoping that people would get a smile out of Ariane losing her mind at all that Binglery.

Mecanimus

That's... actually a great idea.

Chad Hagner

What a great chapter! It was so much fun watching Ariena experiencing the opera for the first time and then having Bingle crashing it and having it even more outlandish tail than his father! 😆

Bunny Waffles

How exciting! I've never seen an opera, though it is something I plan to do at some point in my life, and this makes me want to go even more. You also got a good chuckle out of me at the image of an organ loving vampire being pissed that the best specimens of the instrument are all stuck on holy ground.

Blake

I just knew that Bingle would make a surprise appearance at the Opera after the last chapter! All we need now is for him to crash Ariane's party as well :)

Pinpenny the great lithian

First!


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