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96. The Cubs

🕑 Added 2020-08-27 18:51:04 +0000 UTC

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Mecanimus

She is using a form of charm, yes. Vampires do not have a monopoly on mind manipulation and both mages and Likaeans can do it as well.

magub

Is Lynn using charm at the end there on Maxwell, for i thought that was a thing exclusive to vampires and Likaeans? Or is it som other form of magic and I just misunderstood?

Mecanimus

Learning manipulation from a vampire...

MagicDownUnder (MDU)

Ooooh so this how the God Empress Lynn spent her childhood.

Mecanimus

Maybe some chapters to come will show the return of a certain squad of trainees ;)

Shawn Putnam

Love this chapter. It was so cute. Please have more of the kids shenanigans. They are a fun break and mirror to the main story.

Mecanimus

Glad you enjoyed it, I had fun writing something cuter.

Mecanimus

❤️

Mecanimus

Nice. I thought we all deserved some brevity.

Mecanimus

You’re welcome ;)

Mecanimus

My pleasure.

Mecanimus

I’m afraid we’ll shortly return to carving people.

Mecanimus

The tommy gun way.

ParoxysmDK

This chapter reminded me so much of a very old series i watched as a child called The Little Rascals. Was this old black and white tv series made before my time. But this chapter just had that kind of feel to it. Very well done.

Young Youghurt

I thought that maybe one of them could become Ari's new vassal. Though it would be a little bit weird no?

Young Youghurt

I think there is no doubt that their confrontation will be spectacular because Mecanimus is the best! However I am afraid of "slapping face" because it's really a low bar to aspire. Anyone who read Chinese light novels understands right?

Bunny Waffles

I kind of want to see Ollie and Lynn as well as the successive generations of their kids when they grow up and get married, all working with/under Ariane as part of her motley family of misfits, with each generation calling her Aunt Ari until there ends up just being a whole family line of mages, from great grandparents to little children referring to our favorite immortal monster as Aunt Ari. Also I find it hilarious that for a more 'modern' vampire determined not to fall into the rut some elder vamps succumb to of not keeping up with the times and the advances and changes they bring, her disdain of "okay" and believing it is just a passing fad is delightfully silly.

BramBora

I just had a wonderfully terrifying idea. A unit of Battlemages riding shapeshifted armoured werewolfes. Werewolfs in plated metal battle armour. Enchanted battle armour. In ordered ranks.. and in silence.

carebear90

That was soooo cute! ^^ Very sugar... so much teethache It's really interesting to see how "normalised" the kids' view of genuine monsters has become. But I guess it would be something similar with any organised crime families in the mundane world. So it wasn't a Cabal splinter cell, but just genuine simple bad guys. I really thought their father's family was allready wiped out by her. I must have mixed that up with some other group of badies, that came near her town. But I do hope we see that coming confrontation in a bit more detail... and that it will be a bit mre interactive than: Ariane showing up at their home... slapping them with their own dismembered limbs until they die repeating "you know what you did"...^^ Edit: Which year is it again in the story? It can't be to far until the civil war, can it?

Christie

Owwn! ♥

BramBora

I really, really like this one. Truly well writen.

Andrew

Thank you!

William Dawson

This Lynn side story was very refreshing. Thank you for the chapter!

SunderGoldmane

I love when authors flesh out the little kid side stories! It really carves another dimension into the setting.

Young Youghurt

Thank you for the chapter! Veery cool! Soo armed, dangerous, crazy and organized (not just) people around Chicago. Hm wonder where that will go.

Sean Wilner

Thanks for the chapter!


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