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98. Schooled

🕑 Added 2020-09-07 13:21:25 +0000 UTC

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Mecanimus

edited thx.

Mecanimus

I enjoy subverting expectations when it leads to smiles. ;) If you see any wrongly used terms don't hesitate to tell me and I'll edit.

Mecanimus

;)

carebear90

What about high dusk? Like... the duel starts with the vanishing of the last sliver of sun on the horizon? ^^

carebear90

Well... that would require, that he'd move to Bumblefuck Illinois from "metropolitan" Philadelphia... somehow I don't see that yet. But maybe after a bit more characterization in the next chapters. ^^

Saline Salute

ollowed and that Nashoba’s earring still protect me from tracking spells. "protect" needs an "s"

Lasne

Thanks for the chapter, I like how she is struggling with Magic. She is already si talented elsewhere that struggling with Magic helps with connecting to the character. Maybe Salazar will end up interested in serving under her as someone wise enough to recognize a powerful and fair patron. (Maybe not, servitude is not for everyone).

BurnNote

The enthusiastic surrender was hilarious. I also really appreciate the use of "melancholic", as is right and proper. Whenever I read melancholy used as an adjective, I hurt a little.

Andrew

Thank you!

Mecanimus

And survived through a lot, heh.

Garbled Sounds

I wasn't expecting a man named Salazar to be so understanding and worldly. He sure looks like someone that has lived through a lot.

Young Youghurt

There is a killer on the road... Thank you for the chapter. Edit: I just realised Ari can't high noon. She can only high moon.

Mecanimus

This chapter went quicker than expected. Enjoy!


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