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101. Tempus Fugit.

🕑 Added 2020-09-24 08:08:00 +0000 UTC

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Mecanimus

Nope. As for the rest I think you're right.

Mecanimus

Especially since she can build explosives.

Mecanimus

Nice, I'll pick it up.

Mecanimus

That's because he can talk your ear off.

carebear90

So... I don't remember. Did she get to drink blood from Torran before he had to leave? And while we're at that question: my notes say she only misses Kalinin, Roland and Dvor to get to a full set of vampire essences. Did I miss her getting to suck on a Roland at some point? I expected her to get some at least during last chapter, but I'm not sure.

Sufian Sayed

I notice Ari has the makings of a dangerous yandere, Torran would need to grow eyes on his back now that she's got her dress flapping under control.

tibbish

It reads to me like its 1846 but I'm not 100% sure on that. "In the meanwhile, I continue learning from Ezekiel until, in the month of January eighteen thirty-seven, Margaret disappears." So 1837, then: "I spend the next four years alternating between Philadelphia and my own territory," +4yr, so 1841, then: "Over the next five years I focus on my spellcasting and even start to experiment with complex rituals and my sire’s spells." +5yr, so 1846 is what I get.

K Hilliard

So the final year is, what, exactly?

tibbish

Ariane might prefer it that way. And its not unheard of for the economic center of a given US state to be different from the political capital. In NY for instance New York City is the economic heart of the state but Albany (which is far smaller and feels almost dumpy in comparison) is the political capital.

Heraclitus

I wonder how things are going to work between Ariane and Melusine when Chicago really starts to boom. By 1860 it was in the top 10, population wise. A decade later it's in the top 5. By 1890 it's the second largest in the U.S. There really isn't a real life analogue to Marquette, Illinois, as far as I can tell, but I doubt it'll become anything like Chicago. It feels odd that Ariane's base of power would be in a relatively rinky-dink town, as opposed too the world class city not to far away (not that she would have known what it would become).

tibbish

FWIW for historical info during, preceeding, and following the US Civil War period I'd recommend Atun Shei's youtube channel. Its not just a boring history channel, the guy is a film maker (ok aspiring film maker), and has some real talent at telling a good story as well as being informative. His "Checkmate Lincolnites!" series is damn good. And funny! https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLwCiRao53J1xA26fTIrPaFB_JjiWIADN8

Mecanimus

Ah so even changing the entire barrel was something that would be impossible on the field?

Mecanimus

I edited the part and had her replace the entire barrel to be more lore-accurate. As for the cartridges those are paper cartridges so it should be fine, I think.

Mecanimus

I am cooking some delicious clusterfuck.

Mecanimus

It was hard.

Mecanimus

Will or will I not introduce a new species for the civil war? Hmmmm.

Mecanimus

After another time skip ;)

tibbish

Nitpick: metallic cartridge revolvers didn't show up until the 1850's or so with pinfire revolvers from Europe. In the 1830's any revolver would've been a cap and ball revolver and impractical even for a vampy to reload in combat. You'd have to wait for moon or half moon clip revolvers with swing out cylinders to pop up sometime in the very early 1900's (1908 going by wiki) for that to happen. Top break revolvers starting from the 1880's let you unload fast but reloading is still fairly slow. Prior to quick reloading you'd do a "New York reload" which is where you'd carry multiple pistols and just drop the empty and unholster the loaded one or you'd rush the enemy with your knife, sword, bayonet, or whatever. Specialized revolvers that allowed for quick change cylinders for cap and ball revolvers did exist but they were mostly rich people's toys that popped up around the 1840's and were almost unheard of for use in actual gun fights or war. edit: The most common one you'll see (because of the Clint Eastwood movie Pale Rider) referenced is the Remington 1858 and he makes it look easy and fast to use but IRL they're much harder and slow to use unless you have a good fitting cylinder/reciever and practice lots. Anyways none of this may matter much but if you want to follow the IRL historical time line for developments then it could be useful.

MacDB

Vampire slave wars are on the horizon I say

Jon

This was a very smooth time skip chapter, Mecanimus. It looks like the Civil War is going to be interesting.

Lasne

Thanks for the chapter, Nice forwarding to more action here 🙂

Basil Harpham

Jeffrey is the best negotiator even better than the fay. his motivations whilst simple and know are yet impossible to decipher

Redbeard

My cliffy lies over the ocean, my cliffy lies over the sea...

L Pedersen

I really liked this one! It's nice to see time pass when you have unaging creatures in a story, it also makes their growth more believeable. One thing though, depending on how historically accurate you want to be you might have to rewrite parts of this :X. It's true that around the 1830s Samuel Colt was tinkering with his design and the idea of a revolver wasn't a new thing but it wasn't until now that they really took off. The parts you might want to edit though are when she uses the actual firearm. I can't recall from previous chapters if you've mentioned mentioned the process of loading a muzzleloader but at this time in history that should have been a cap and ball revolver, meaning that you would have to load each chamber individually like you would an older muzzleloader with the difference being instead of priming the pan on a flintlock you'd put a cap on the nib for that chamber. It could be that the lack of detail in the scene when Ari is testing her new toy is because you didn't want to bog the scene down with lengthy explainations and overly detailed handling but the way I read it made it sound like she was reloading cartridges in her revolver which would be way out of time. It's a nitpick and you're free to ignore it, I just felt like I should let you know incase this was new information for you. Can't wait to see who sent her the letter ;)

Garbled Sounds

The civil war is coming, that should be interesting.

Young Youghurt

I write a comment with utmost impatience. It cannot be! It is.

Mecanimus

Is small cliffy.

sarvashaktimaan

Probably Achilles, Arianne's brother.

Robby Cahyadi

why is the cliffy there! noooo thx by the chapter, keep up the good work

Meise

Who??? Who is it?

Eileen The Crow

You son of a bitch don't tease me like this

Mecanimus

Sorry for the delay, this one was hard to write for some reason.


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