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104. Warrens of the World

🕑 Added 2020-10-08 22:49:55 +0000 UTC

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Jonathan

"like a child hiding her feet under the cover" should it be head and covers? Feet seems odd.

Jonathan

Hmmm short tables...child labor? or gnomes XD? Then again "warren" makes me think of Goblins. With the primal cave maybe even tie in the little people. Maybe the hiding/space magic is how they hide from the world and where the Queen learned it. As long as they don't have beards or green skin their human retainers can act as "parents" in cities. Though minor illusions could open more options for the species characteristics. If space is so fluid for them can they pass between realms? Storywise they would need a good reason not to act as messengers if so. Seems better if not, as it kinda ties the motivations of Queen and race. If they live in mountains or underground and craft how is their relationship w/dverger. Maybe frenemies? Depends on how isolated or based in North America. Space or realm magic strongly ties to Earth's rigidity and the dying realm, could tie in the story of the other realm by making them refugees from the other world. Though will need reason to lose knowledge / capability to affect realms.

Andrew

Thank you!

Adrian Gorgey

Exciting

Jon

Whew, that went better than I expected.

Mecanimus

This one is a shortie because it was a great place to stop, otherwise, I would have had another 8k+ chappie. On the other hand, the arc is fully planned so the next one should arrive relatively soon. Enjoy!


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