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81. The Test

🕑 Added 2020-06-05 13:37:36 +0000 UTC

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Tobias Hammeken Arboe

Aight, just joined the Patreon. Please tell me there's more William in the future

Mecanimus

My pleasure and count on me to keep them coming. Writing has become my passion and now I'm getting money out of it. I don't think I have ever been that consistent about anything in my life so far.

Mecanimus

The fate of Cornelius' team will be explained in the chapter I'm writing... don't worry ;)

Aiden Milne

I started reading this story when it first popped up on trending and after the last chapter decided to get your patreon and all I can say is that it's the best 5$ I've spent and thank you for all the advanced chapters and all the work you put into them :)

riseris

It was a wonderful chapter. I kind of hope these young brats get a chance to talk with Ariane while she is at the town. To be honest, I feel like it would be something all of them would get something out of. Also I'm curious if the apparently arrogant Cornelius and his team passed which I hope we'll learn next chapter. Also hope we'll see this group again later on down the road when Ariane and the White Cabal are both in a more formal alliance and in her established territory. Edit: I just noticed on a reread but, it said that Team Phenix passed but they were one of the three teams mentioned as being still on standby when this team took the test.

Jed Wolfgang

That was a great chapter, and I usually hate POV shifts. This is probably one of my favorites of the series so far.

Mecanimus

Nice. I knew people would like it, it's not bad if I do say so myself.

Mecanimus

I tried to make it read a bit like a YA school fantasy

Mecanimus

I had a lot of fun writing that.

Mecanimus

How was it =D

Mecanimus

I'll correct everything today, thanks!

ParoxysmDK

Another masterful use of alternative POV. Well done, i really enjoyed this chapter.

ThisThatAnd

felt that stressed -> this stressed?, Reggie camps -> clamps, Hopkins demand -> demands, jump in surprised -> surprise, William add -> adds, fecal matters -> maybe just fecal matter, New-Orleans -> no hyphen?, “ooh” and “aah” -> maybe "oohs" and "aahs", way in over -> maybe in way, I had ever -> maybe have, sobbing’s -> sobbing, hex and curses -> hexes?, of that sorry lot -> maybe this, that ragtag -> maybe this, slaughter behind chills -> maybe behind her, headquarter -> maybe headquarters. "Super" sounds to me a bit too modern of an expression but perhaps isn't in reality. Nice chapter!

Zachary Smith

Awesome excited to read this

SunderGoldmane

Awesome, I was hoping we would get to see this test from the trainees perspective.

Jacob

I really like these pov changes, it's one thing to know how strong she is but it's soooo much more fun to see it through mortal eyes

Mecanimus

Oh yes they will.

Pierre Steiner

Yeeeees that was sooo good. Now I feel like the White Cabal is going to have a bit of a role to play in the events that are to come, I like that!

Mecanimus

;)

Andrew

Thank you!

Mecanimus

Nah it would have been catastrophic for what follows. Can't sample the younglings, it's just not done.

Mecanimus

I like the idea of mages as dangerous when prepared. That is why they can even take out vampires. With that said, cunning werewolves can still surprise them while they cannot surprise nor overcome anything above fledgling.

Maradrax

I would like to see more POV chapters like this when relevant! Was a great read! Hopefully Ari doesn’t get drunk off blood. Heh. (She most likely got a few nibbles when she couldn’t fake it)

sarvashaktimaan

I never really thought about how scary werewolves were to non vampires. I had assumed scary but not 'squads of trained battlemages suffer casualties' scary. The last 2 chapters really put that into perspective.

Heraclitus

The only thing better than seeing Ariane terrify the very soul out of a group of arrogant mages is watching it from their POV.


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