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92. Bone Caller

🕑 Added 2020-08-06 13:10:10 +0000 UTC

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Mecanimus

I do have a plan for Urchin's development, don't worry, and you are right. He is not mean to be a ruler. That said, what she trained him to do was not to be a ruler but to understand the importance of appearance and image. We shall see if he finds his path...

Jonathan

Was reviewing and saw that Ari is training Urchin about being a ruler which fits for her as a Nirari but his bloodline is Vandheim so it might be an interesting subplot to have it not jive as well with his essence. All the side training, like weapons and speaking, might help him progress but he could have an arc where he discovers the true core/essence of his bloodline. I was thinking it could be more oddball or tricksy so he could hit it off with Sinead and learn from him as we saw in the council. It expands the character and the world while also giving Ari a learning moment about mentoring and may let Sinead stick around in some form (may have to be in dreams if other vampires stay around).

Mecanimus

Edited, thanks!

ThisThatAnd

Thanks for the chapter! Tick -> thick, burdened -> burden, but help being -> help but being or maybe help but be, "ledge sometimes," -> maybe "ledge, sometimes".

Mecanimus

Thank you so much for the support by the way. It's thanks to you and the others that I have decided to keep writing this story full time.

Mecanimus

I can't promise that I won't cliff you again lol.

Darren Li

Great chapter. This is the only patreon where I dont mind giving a few bucks every month to read.

K

Phenomenal - one of the best stories on Patreon. Every time I thought I was about to run into a cliff, there was more - thank you for another awesome chapter!

Mecanimus

Huhu. Every time I'm post I'm slightly worried but then people appreciate it and that makes me glad.

Mecanimus

Good. The arc is still not over.

Bloodorange17

This chapter is so good, made my day

Andrew

Thank you!

Lasne

I hunted this chapter and found it tasty !! The fight, the cast interactions and the Black Peak way of seizing control were well writen.

Mecanimus

You're welcome as always.

Anghwrtais

Good chapter, thank you.

Mecanimus

O_o SPYYYYYY!

Garbled Sounds

Ariane the dog whisperer!

Mani

Ah! it's me!... but it's a baddie, oof XD

Mecanimus

:0 I wrote Frost casting his spell with some serious music blasting in the background and I loved it, but when I read it back I wondered if it was too much. I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed it.

K Hilliard

Love it.

Bunny Waffles

THIS! This is why I follow you, why I subscribe, why I toss money at you all for the pleasure of reading a bit more a little bit sooner. This was an absolutely wonderful chapter, and the kind of style and evocative prose that inspires and paints a vivid picture in my mind!

Mecanimus

Yep. Far too weak.

Amazing chapter. On one hand i would have loved to see Devourer!Frost, but on the other I think she's still a bit too weak to easily have a Fledgling, no?

Louisthau

Oooooooooh boy. Oh boy oh boy ohboyohboyohboy!


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