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106. End of the Line.

🕑 Added 2020-10-21 00:26:53 +0000 UTC

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Mecanimus

She followed the scent of vitality, that's how I justify it. Though it was more for narrative convenience.

Mecanimus

I explained it in the chapter. They followed Nirari in and found both entrances, not her.

PrimalShadow

It seems like a might coincidence that in traveling paths that span worlds, Ariane finds herself exiting so close to where she entered. Kinda hard to believe, given that we were explicitly told she wasn't capable of using fate to guide herself here...

PrimalShadow

How did John find Ariane when she had a stealth bracelet?

Andrew

Thank you!

carebear90

So John is a Natalis Fledgling now? Or did enough time pass already for him to become a Courtier? I guess, it is the clan, that fit him the most with their strenght focus. I'm still interested in why Lord Jarek would want to turn him in the first place but I doubt, it was charity. ^^ This connection opens still up another point of conflict for the upcoming ciivil war. I quite like it. The feral state was very confusing to read through. I felt as disoriented, as Arianne must have felt. That was very well done, I think.

Mecanimus

I'm really glad I nailed the going rogue feel there.

Mecanimus

It's because John was cooler as a human. I know.

Pierre Steiner

You're not alone in this, I've had quite a similar experience. That was really good writing ngl

Pierre Steiner

Splendid! That was sooo well written I just ate through it with confused delight

Randee

It literally says exactly what happened to John in this chapter

Garbled Sounds

I don't really like the developments with John. Not sure why though. Her delirious state when turning rogue was really chaotic, which was obviously intentional. It was kind of hard to read through but I like it after the fact.

Aapjuh

john as in big strong but ugly, faithful but dumb, dog john? why is he in texas? how did he even meet a vampire lord, i thought he was living with his ugly wife in peace in or near the city ari runs? feel like i missed something.

Darren Li

I love it. I honestly don't know how, but you managed to convey the delirium and confusion from Ariane's near-feral state and make me go through all kinds of emotions. Maybe it's because I'm just sleepy, but I haven't had an experience like that in a while. Nice job and thanks! I wonder what she'll do now that she's basically free to do what she wants.

Basil Harpham

he was protected which means he was at risk of being lost

Mecanimus

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Bunny Waffles

Well now you have me curious as to what way she has figured out how to permanently put Malakim down. I look forward to finding out what scheme she manages to concoct to keep herself and hers safe from the machinations and struggle of two godlike beings.

MacDB

i think if there's any way for ari to get any sort of major strength upgrade within a century it'll be by going to the fae world with sinead for an arc and devouring certainmagical beings + that would be such an epic arc.


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