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109. Hell's Gates

🕑 Added 2020-11-06 01:02:28 +0000 UTC

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Mecanimus

I like him as well and I don't know why either. Maybe it's because he is rather different.

I just wanted to mention that I'm happy John is back cause he's probably been one of my favorite characters in the story so far. I'm not sure as to why but John is just great. Thats all I got.

Mecanimus

I'll look it up, thank you. It will help with my research.

Andrew

Thank you!

Mecanimus

Hmm you're right I'll add a sentence detailing the precautions she took.

Gardor

The first bit is her complaining about having to personally watch over her relative, and then the next bit has her galavanting off to New Orleans with nary a thought for his protection

L Pedersen

New chapter woooo! Just the thing to cheer me up as the world once more departs on a journey to tartarus in a small woven basket. However, as much as I found it fitting to describe the watcher as a "big thingamajig", it's not exactly a period term :P. Not sure if you want to change it or not. Oh and again for historical accuracy, as far as our historical record is concerned, in 1840-50ish we had yet to come up with the theory of the "sea peoples" fucking up the bronze age. It was first around 1860 that the idea started circulating. But this actually fits your previous narrative and it isn't hard to imagine that vampires would know of these things first and then once they deemed it proper would mortal society learn of it. It was really cool to see it come up though, can't wait to see what you'll cook up from this. If you're interested in this topic I would recommend looking up Eric Cline, he wrote a book about this very recently and I think he's got a youtube channel as well

Bum-Sama

They grow up so fast

Heraclitus

Damn. John flexin, literally and figuratively.

sarvashaktimaan

Pretty sure spines and metal bend very differently our dear John/Doe


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