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The Calamitous Bob 3: Ex Machina

🕑 Added 2020-12-03 04:09:21 +0000 UTC

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Matthew

EMU (EXPERIMENTAL MILITARY UNIT) just because it would be a funnily stupid name.

JP Koenig

CROW (Cthonic Radiant Orb Warframe) or (Cthonic Relentless Offensive Warframe)

StarWolf

Okay last attempt to post my comments! I would suggest you name this bonus story 1: chapter 3. The way it currently is I'd I thought this was the literal 3rd story, not chapter 3. Chapter 1 is eh, okay.... but the story definitely improves in chapters 2 and 3! I like this story and would buy it. However I am already waiting impatiently for Journey. If you want to switch stories for a while I am good with it especially if you park Journey at a significant lull in the story. After Nariri has been dealt with... or 1865. I hope you continue to write Journey after Nariri has been dealt with.

Cadastral

Also, wouldn't "F" be a closer sound to "V"?

Cadastral

Faithful event --> fateful event? Citizen redesigned as heir --> re-designated?

JP Koenig

Thanks for the thought exercise! Obviously, not all of them are serious. WARG (Warforge Animated Royal Golem) // SPARC (Special Powered Automaton: Raid Commander) // SARA (Specialized Assault Royal Automaton) // HAG (Harrak Assault Golem) // SASHA (Special Assault Striker Harrak Automata) // WEEB (War Engine Enlisted Breacher)

Tarodan

What about WARDEN = Weaponized Automaton Royal Directive: Enemy Neutralizer? Alternatively, for a historical reference, MAHARAL = Mechanical (Or Modular) Automaton: Heavy Armour Relentless Assault Liason (or Launcher, but I think Relentless Assault Liason is funny)

Gibborim

I'm always partial to naming things Achmed the Snake.

Gibborim

If you do continue to publish with PDFs and epubs available, please also publish as a normal post.

Lowe K. Lyesmith

Or, more for the component words, as a name "SOLAIRE" : Series One Large Automated Imperial Retribution Entity Which would make "Sol" the appropriate nickname.

Andres Montemayor

SERV--ANT

Andres Montemayor

Self-driven Engineered Robot Version-- Armored Nodal Techoanimatron

Lowe K. Lyesmith

Work in progress, but if SOLFIS stays Canon, then Sophisticated Organic Lifeforms Fortifying Intelligent System. Otherwise : ICARUS (Incredibly Complex Automated Reconnaissance Utility System)

Lowe K. Lyesmith

How precious, thank you ♥️

Andrew

Thank you!

Malir Blackspear

True Edifice of Automated Reduction. It sounds snobbish enough to be both imperial and intimidating.

Mecanimus

Question (careful, spoiler): What should Solfis really be named? Choose an acronym like Harrak Armored Retribution Mechanimatron, which gives HARM and Harm would be the name of the golem. You get the idea. If I like a suggestion enough, it will become cannon.