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The Calamitous Bob 21: Down
🕑 Added 2021-01-23 07:10:32 +0000 UTCComments
Jamarr
"They passed by a shoemaker, someone who made cauldrons." Since it's a list of only two items, it might be better to join it with an "and" instead of a comma. "That one dangly dude with the sleeveless shirt in winter frowned, then turned around and walked away after realizing what she was." dandly -> gangly TFTC!
Andrew
Thank you!
