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A Journey of Black and Red: 122. Disheartening Moments

🕑 Added 2021-01-24 00:46:32 +0000 UTC

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Mai0e

A Rolands stubbornness is realy something else ... 😂 Finaly Ari will her her revenge on Anatole, I hope it will be a sweet fight.

Kota

This was such an incredibly fun read, had to go over it twice. Also good to be reminded that as powerful as Ariane has become, there's always a bigger fish...

Mai0e

She brought down 12 masters, 2 courtiers and 2 fledglings if I counted right. Not bad, not bad at all!

Grammarmelade

Corrections: until we [rich->reach] another patch of woods break the law [is->in] such a brazen fashion

Mecanimus

Yes, oversight. I should have explained. This does not track her, instead, it bounces against anything with an aura. I added a sentence to that effect.

Adrian Gorgey

They better treat her well. Or they'll have made themselves a bitter and vengeful enemy in the war.

Jed Wolfgang

Sigh. Bad luck. More running for Ari

kyle

Ahh that could of been what I was missing!

Johannes Oest

Didn't she say after she got caught by her sire that the mage couldn't warn her because of the earrings and that she wouldn't wear them anymore while traveling legally? I would have to reread it and i am too tired right now, but i will check later

ParoxysmDK

If nirari cant track her then some no name masters with an artifact shouldn't either. I agree that this seems like an oversight plothole.

kyle

The only thing I can think of is if the spell the guy at the train cast marked her somehow.

Tarodan

I'm guessing its the significant difference between half-baked human mages and ancient European vampires.

kyle

How is it she hasn't been able to be tracked this whole time, but now anyone can? Did I miss something?

StarWolf

Seriously? Every author I follow, who posted today ended with a seriously annoying cliffhanger! Argh! That said great chapter!

Wheeler

:)

MacDB

Ari absolutely destroying fools!!!! Her fighting style is really getting there, she just needs to polish up her sword play with Rose and get a few more supplementary spells and she’ll be perfect as she’s pushes to be a lord

Andrew

Thank you!

Heraclitus

What an absolutely awesome chapter.

L Pedersen

wooooo the faithful shall be rewarded!


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