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A Journey of Black and Red chapter 121: Folly

🕑 Added 2021-01-18 14:35:17 +0000 UTC

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Mecanimus

Oh, yes. Enjoy catching up!

Vyktor

More boom for her kingdom 😆

Mecanimus

I think I prefer the idea of a duel rather than just dropping a house and hiding in it. To be fair, she should not have accepted those terms to start with.

WickedlyDesigned

There's something that I don't understand: what was the point of the mirror armor? I mean, the conditions for the duel allowed for literally anything, except for heavy explosives. So why not simply create a mobile "pillbox"? We know for a fact that Ariane is fine, if the sun is up, but she's inside a well shaded room, or even just her armored coffin. We also know that as a vampire she is bloody strong. So create an armored metal room, reinforce and ward it to hell, add easily removable wheels, a secure door, and small, easy to close windows on all 4 walls. She pushes the thing in (weight calculated so that she can only move the thing while it's on its wheels and even then only with effort), windows closed, door open and on her side, on the back. Duel starts. She releases the wheels, dropping the thing on the floor. Gets in, closes door. Opens front window, starts sniping with spells. If a sunlight spell is cast, she closes the window and waits it out - given their original expectations, said spell should be rather limited in its duration, as it consumes rare resources. As for how long she needs to wait exactly, a simple detection spell for sunlight should work, something that I believe shouldn't be a problem for them to include. In case Leikny tries to circle, she has other windows to use. And in case it turns into a game of whack a mole, Leikny should have had but a single real strike, something that should be rather easy to bait out of her - and once that's gone and done with, the hunt is on. I believe such a setup should have made Ariane feel much more secure, and would have been better able to cope with the opening of the dome as well.

Mecanimus

Mercy denied, don't go out at night!

blackzeros7

Author can you apologize to Arianne for me? Whenever I read she is running I cannot help but imagine her naruto running. Poor Arianne.

Mecanimus

You are welcome as always,

Mecanimus

It was not and was completely iced over with the mechanism deactivated, but yeah it was still easy ot foresee. Oh well.

Mecanimus

Not my best but I'm glad I still pulled it out.

Mecanimus

Indeed, she will stay a vampire.

Mecanimus

Yes, the observatory was tempered with.

Mecanimus

You will find out for sure in the next episoooooode!

Andrew

Thank you!

L Pedersen

People are calling it obvious but I think that's the point. Loth and co were looking for sabotage and subterfuge. It would not be the first time someone missed the obvious by looking too close. Also I got the vibe that the dome had not been opened in living memory and thus it's not too far fetched that they failed to consider it.

Maradrax

I didn’t expect the observatory to be able to fully open. Always thought they opened a section and then looked through that part.

Pierre Steiner

Well yes and no, it was mentioned it was a dome, not an observatory. But then it could be argued that Loth and his wife should have known that detail, nonetheless I don't feel it was that obvious, especially as it was mentioned the ceiling was natural, reinforcing the cave feeling of it all

Joe ?

I love me a protagonist that doesn't show pointless mercy.

Pierre Steiner

Oh that was gooooood man, still feeling shaky from all that anticipation and excitement!

Bum-Sama

Yes it may be obvious, but give our author some slack. His writing and plots are beyond good. We all knew as soon as the challenge was issued that they would fail

Mai0e

"I have grown used to being the eldest among those who walk under the sun." Well more likely shes the only one not walking under the sun :D

Adrian Gorgey

Have to say that this was the most glaring thing. Should have been at midnight. Still, I enjoyed the fight and the tension.

Joseph

Why would she agree to fight while the sun was up at all? Also.have to agree with the others opening the Observatory was very obvious.

StarWolf

What if she consumed a number of more Hasting?

StarWolf

Looking forward to the next chapters, is our heroine going to chase down the “mask” or head back home shortly?

9mur

Could she have tried channeling the Hastings essence against the sun? I know it was mentioned, that she'll never be able to walk directly under the sun but still, it could've helped

Gardor

Opening the skylight is super duper obvious, there is absolutely zero chance they wouldn't have immediately figured out the "plan"

Young Youghurt

What about Leiknis father? He just left or others held him while he attempted to attack? Perhaps he kneels heartbroken before corpse of his daughter?

MacDB

Come onnnn! it's called a dome for gods sake, i thought of that instantly how can neither Loth, his wife or Ariane?


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