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The Calamitous Bob 35: Minutiae
🕑 Added 2021-03-06 08:10:15 +0000 UTCRETCON ALERT: Due to a conflict between my love for the letter V and the supposed inability of people to say it properly, I have proceeded with the following changes:
Venetti is now Benetti
Varan is now Baran
Varska now comes from the city-state of Helock, in the north. It's a city of mages.
As a general rule, uneducated people from Enoria and Baran have trouble with the letter V. Nobles etc have learned it and can pronounce it properly, except Farran who has issues. Past chapters have been modified to this effect, and let me tell you, that was a fucking pain in my ass.
Hope you enjoy the chappie.
Comments
Nicholas Paterson
Some quick edits: but by the local gods did they pack a oomph. -> an oomph. the politely asked, a far cry from their previous meeting. -> she politely asked(?) that forced contraction that VIv had learnt to detect -> Viv She chew it thoughtfully, then gave a strangely human nod. -> chewed it Maradoc, god of travelers. -> God of Travelers members of the spotted feathers arrived -> Spotted Feather โI came to give you this. I case you havenโt, eaten yet.โ ->this, in case you haven't eaten yet." (not an edit) I still noticed a bunch of the old "Venetti/Varan" when I was reading the RR stuff, mostly around where it was first used.
Mecanimus
I think I upgraded it,
Luke Matthews
shouldnt it be nacsent instead of budding?
lenkite
The MC. has 4. or 5 names by now which is a bit eye-rolling.
Pretentious Slime
Iโve fallen in love with this particular wn
william wallace
Mother of Dragons... oh this ends well. ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ
L Pedersen
Arthur best girl.
Railsrains
Lol
Andrew
Thank you!
