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A Journey of Black and Red 125: Tempus Iterum Fugit

🕑 Added 2021-02-09 03:13:08 +0000 UTC

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Mecanimus

Yes. Just like a Vassal, it anchors her.

RottenTangerine

Thinking back on this chapter, I really liked the scene with the baby. It was humanizing and interesting to think of her dynasty.

RottenTangerine

All good! I just wanted to make sure I didn't miss anything.

Mecanimus

Soooorry there just wasn’t a good time.

RottenTangerine

Maybe? A few of the time skips were within Illinois but I suppose we haven't had a chapter dedicated mostly there yet.

RottenTangerine

I enjoyed the time skips here. Seeing a paragraph every few years was nice without making the whole thing boring.

LenoraeKB

I'm guessing itll pop up next time we see her in illinois

RottenTangerine

Did I miss the bit on Dvor essence or has it not come up yet?

Andrew

Thank you!

Mecanimus

Yup, all in due time.

LenoraeKB

One point of note is that when she got Dvor essence from Torran we got a teaser about feeling something from the west (presumably illinois), but with this skip we hopped over her finding out what benefit the Dvor essence gives her. Something to maybe slip in somewhere soon.

Lictor Magnus

If anything he's probably running around trying to take care of all the children he fathered XD

Mecanimus

This is merely a teaser!

Matthew Lester

I laughed pretty hard at that cliffhanger. You’re just amazing.

Mecanimus

I am surprised as well. I never expected that the story would become so popular.

Mecanimus

Men and women both.

Mecanimus

Yes, exactly that.

Mecanimus

Yes I dont have any good idea anyway.

Pierre Steiner

That's about it, I don't think we've had a much more detailed explanation yet, but it's fair to assume it's the manifestation of a Lord/Lady's essence, able to affect the world around them (kinda similar to how a Soul Weapon is a manifestation of essence in an offensive form, but on a larger and more profound way? Probably shaped by the vampire's ideal and personality or smth)

Froyo Baggins

Seconded on wanting a Sheridan bit, but is seems easy enough to add as the beginning of the next chapter.

Heraclitus

Can someone remind me what exactly a Magna Arqa is? I vaguely get the feeling it's some variable innate ability that Vampires get when they become Lords/Ladies, but I'm not actually sure.

Adrian Gorgey

This was great. I love that the Red Cabal is a thing. Probably filled with abnormally attractive mages with flowing wavy locks like spun gold and smug smiles.

Jon

You do the best time skips, Mecanimus. I knew it was coming and have been looking forward to it, but I'm still surprised we've made it all the way to the civil war. I can't wait to see how this develops.

Lowe K. Lyesmith

"Ah, fuck" is the most beautiful summary for the start of a war I ever read ❤️

Mecanimus

Yes, exactly. And they are headed by Merritt's son Ollie.

Mecanimus

Tbf I learned it by fucking up the previous timeskip and learning from my mistakes.

Mecanimus

It is time for the big one.

Mecanimus

Good, the last one left me unsatisfied. Glad that this format works.

Mecanimus

I FORGOT.

Mecanimus

The next arc will be quite long. As for the other conflicts, the civil war arc will offer an introguing development. I won't spoil though.

Mecanimus

Indeed, a most correct analysis...

Mecanimus

Actually is the Ekon clan.

Mecanimus

Yes I have maybe five or six wiki pages open at all times. Although this time the delay was also due to my lack of inspiration.

L Pedersen

It was really nice to see how all of Ari's various investments are going. Her werewolfs, the White Cabal and the vampires who follow her, we even got to see her mortal bloodline continue. :> But I'm really curious about the Red Cabal, is this the first time they're introduced? Reading between the lines I'd guess that unlike the White Cabal who are allied with Ari but steer their own course the Red are entirely loyal to her and made up of all the mages Sinead sired. Oh well, nothing for it but to wait until the next chapter.

Mecanimus

No cliffhangers twice in a row. Consider yourselves lucky!

Mecanimus

Nice, because the previous one had lukewarm reception so I'm glad that this format works.

Hecktony

Time skips are cool, the other povs are still miserable. Maybe I read too casually, but it's always distracting trying to figure out if the character is a mindless mook or an actual named individual.

Joel Bullock

I love that line "unfortunately we are the sorry idiots" "ah fuck"

S. Nutter

Your timeskips are so smooth, and I like that you give the point of reference as an event. Not just the year. Really helps the flow. Thank you for the chapter!

Blah64

The moment I saw that first time skip I got so much HYPE.

Jacob

Thanks for the chapter, I really enjoy how you do the time skips

crusaderstar

Very fun! Very excited for next chapter! One comment though, where is Sheridan? Just did a reread which was a blast, and noticed Dalton felt like a much deeper relationship with Ariane vassal-wise, which makes sense since they both were young. But if he's still around I'd love to see more of his character and motivation.

StarWolf

Agreed, excellent time skip. Well done, looking forward to how you deal with the civil war as in how many chapters it consumes. Also I have been wondering about WWI and WWII and if Ari will work with the OSI or will simply go raiding in Europe on her own. Or if you will go in another direction all-together?

MacDB

Oooo I wonder if the vampires will merely go to war by proxy or actually clash. Because if they do kill eachother they may make America ripe for the picking for the euro vamps.

MagicWafflez

sinead has his fingers all over that railroad xD and ari is politely looking away

Enzo Elacqua

You know I actually respect how long it takes between each chapter, it shows the amount of effort put into making the events match reality, as far as it can

sarvashaktimaan

One great ending after another.

LenoraeKB

An excellent timeskip. I can't wait. This is gonna be great.


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