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A Journey of Black and Red 127: A House Divided

🕑 Added 2021-02-22 03:33:13 +0000 UTC

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sinergistic

"fractious disputes and intestine wars" - intestine > internecine, surely? Unless this is a joke about shitty wars. Edit: I'm curious if you have a preferred route for free editing for things like this?

Mecanimus

That means a lot to me because I do pay attention to the style and the dialogues so that every story and every character keeps their own identity. Or at least I try.

Mecanimus

Yes, especially the defining what you want to be part.

Tyler B

This is like the revolutionary war for vampires. Their are a lot of similarities to the American revolution here.

Lowe K. Lyesmith

Even more confusing when you take the first fic of theirs on Royal Road into account, which - while still better than most - is way behind Journey and Bob!

Lowe K. Lyesmith

Pretty sure she doesn't become a lord. This fic is thankfully not woke.

Albedo's Ahoge

I am guess this is the progress route for our favourite vampiress to become a Lord/Lady.

Albedo's Ahoge

Another good chapter. Thank you.

Lozt

The dichotomy of the style, descriptions, and prose of B&R and Bob is amazing to me. One can usually discern an author between different works, but not with these two tales. Subject matter aside, the writing is just so unique that with every chapter/release I am more and more interested, and subsequently invested in each story.

Bum-Sama

A vampire war sounds like a great opportunity for Ariane to Devour and expand her supply of essence-statues in the mind palace

Darren Li

With the mentions of magic affecting the world as we readers see it, I wonder if the magna arqa are tools of power that affect the landscape so much that even history wouldn't have a reasonable explanation for it. This will be so cool!!!

Mai0e

So much anticipation

Young Youghurt

Hoo scary

Adrian Gorgey

Epic

shillbear

Idk every time i read magna arqa i think its pokemon for some weird reson hope i stop doing that as it ruin a good book

Andrew

Thank you!

Mecanimus

An ear-gourmet lady like no others.

StarWolf

I wouldn’t be surprised if Ariane's Magna Arqa is something like a living thorny hedge to trip, slow, corral her prey and at the same time it can also be a defense. Wonder if in these battles Ariane will become a Lady?

Mecanimus

.... perhaps.

Mecanimus

I assure you, it will be quite hard to miss.

Mecanimus

Yep. Or becoming a lord gives you access to the Magna Arqa. Who knows?

Heraclitus

The crack about Melusine's Nightmare had me laughing. Metis best pony.

MacDB

Wow that’s an amazing end to the chapter. I’m crazily excited to see all the magna arqas throughout this war. Hopefully a bit of dread pirate ariane at the end of the next chapter too.

Lictor Magnus

Thanks for another great chapter. I’m excited to see how this alternate history plays out.

Enzo Elacqua

What exactly is required to become a lord? Is it just figuring out what your magna arqa is?


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