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The Calamitous Bob 36: A Matter of Taste

🕑 Added 2021-03-09 02:34:21 +0000 UTC

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Nicholas Paterson

Some quick edits: Varska’s apartments on the fourth floor where off limit. -> were off limits. “You sutptised me, stole a kiss, -> stupitised(?)(stupefied/surprised) Varska had brought a couch up into a greenhouse -> into the greenhouse The outlander caressed Varska’s shock of dark curls slowly -> locks of dark curls(?) “I think I’ve heard about Halluria before. Form Farren. -> From Farren. It happens from times to times. -> (isn't the phrase "time to time"?) lasers that cut through stone and use them as whip. -> as a whip. Beginner 4 - Beginner 9 -> (For the others, you only included the number if the rank stayed the same) Viv had never brooches the subject, of course -> broached Lastly, the church is one of their crops’ main purchaser -> purchasers

Nicholas Paterson

"the term venomous is applied to organisms that bite (or sting) to inject their toxins, whereas the term poisonous applies to organisms that unload toxins when you eat them." -Google. So I guess either could be correct depending on how it kills.

fbt

is that really right? folks get so anal about misuse of poisonous/venomous (pretty simple, rly), but a plant? that has no actual venom, doesn't bite you, etc...source?

Sebastian Lachs

A plant that kills you through chemicals when you touch it is venomous, not poisonous.

Mecanimus

Good because I'm bad at romance lol.

Jon

I'm glad to see Viv settling in so well and establishing a bit of normalcy. I also appreciate that the relationship between her and Varska exists, but that you aren't focusing too heavily on it.