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The Calamitous Bob 44: Progress
🕑 Added 2021-04-12 12:24:37 +0000 UTCA short one this time.
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Mecanimus
Sorry most individual chapters before 60 were posted without proofreading from beta readers. The larger documents should be cleaner.
fbt
at the target practice, you put viv when you meant to put Marruk I think. Second line. Viv looked down towards Kazar to see a standing target made of a stone held up by several logs. Viv stood nearby, hands on her waist and wheezing quite loudly. Viv whistled, and the stout Kark gave a sign and moved away.
Mecanimus
Yeah probably blue boxes are a mess
Valentin Chibiriak
Thankx for chapter. One question in chapter 35 hand to hand combat advanced 6, here Apprentice 6. A mistake?
lenkite
“Solfis and Varska agreed that most adults plateaued at the low twenties in values that had a limited impact on their stats.” This is a bit unclear
RageBone
well then, i noticed: "Viv looked down towards Kazar to see a standing target made of a stone held up by several logs. Viv stood nearby, hands on her waist and wheezing quite loudly. Viv whistled, and the stout Kark gave a sign and moved away" Viv stood nearby, shouldn't it be Maruk? "Her Focus and Acuity had rosen by two [...]" rosen, risen? I'm no native so can't say for sure. Thanks for the chapter!
Dlor
The task was completed as juggling several equations at the same time. -> The task was complicated as juggling several equations at the same time.
Andrew
Thank you!
Mecanimus
Probably has a few typos sorry
