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131. Uncivil

🕑 Added 2021-03-16 13:15:41 +0000 UTC

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Mecanimus

It probably had a real evolutionary advantage but I do like the more eldritch explanation,

DM

I like the idea of the uncanny valley having a survival role.

Omega

some enterprising soul had set up a temporary bar for officers to drown their sorrows i. This should be in

Mecanimus

Yes I needed an excuse to play around with history haha

Avery Aderyn

I really liked this chapter. The part about saving Lincoln's son was really cool (I think you spelled his name wrong). Little actions building up and snow balling until their future is unrecognizable from our past.

mt2222

Found the Easter Egg copied from terry pratchett: “On the cover, a tiny gnome was depicted sitting on a mushroom. One fateful night, a thunderbolt had struck nearby and the brief illumination had played tricks on the child’s mind, ”

Adrian Gorgey

Beautifully written

Mecanimus

Yep, I'll change it.

Parry Henis

I don't believe people back then had vibes. I believe they had to do with "airs" and such. That saied, the chapter was of the quality I've come to expect. Thank you. :)

Venalitor

Oo~ Urchin's little play was shivering!

Generagitaux

I was wondering why we hadn’t heard of Urchin for a while. Also what has Sinead been up to?

Cadastral

Thanks for the Chapter! I really like the little historical details you include, like Grant's original name.

RottenTangerine

Thanks for the chapter! This was really fun to read. It looks like we finally found out what the Dvor essence does.

Pierre Steiner

Wow was that Urchin with a rather heavy-handed but well executed use of Charm? I'm digging that! Urchin deserves a good character development like that

Epicmission

Wow. Lincoln’s kids will live now? Can’t wait to see where that goes! And ulyss’s won’t be seen as a drunk? I love the little edits to history! I can’t wait to see what these change! Willie was always seen as a smart kid if I can remember so maybe he becomes important?

Mecanimus

Excellent.

Mecanimus

Will edit!

Mecanimus

Yes, will edit.

Mecanimus

Good, most people liked the Urchin story but I enjoyed the Sheridan one as well.

Mecanimus

We're going back to normal chapters as action resumes, but I'm just not sure how else to relay important events.

Hecktony

Not a fan of how often we seem to dip back into play-by-play retelling of events intermixed with mini-interludes, I kind of miss the old Ariane chapters where everything that happened (even her reminiscing about past events) passed through her POV rather than the pseudo-journal type entries.

Tarodan

"Now, boy, you got two knees and I got three bullets. Where. Are. The. Crates?” One of my favourite things about this story, and your writing, is all the great lines that are oh so enjoyable every time I read one. This one had me in stitches.

SunderGoldmane

Well done with that last portion! Also I think you used “seized” somewhere in there when you may have meant “ceased”?

Andrew

Thank you!

Falxie

Also WW2. I wonder if and/or how all the nazi „superweapons“ will be brought into the story like the V2, Schwerer Gustav, u-boots, heavy tanks (Tiger I/II, Maus), the first jet fighters and so on. Also cant forget the pacific theater.

Aapjuh

One one hand > On The caban > cabin Thanks for the chapter :)

Matthew Lester

The cold war is going to be an absolute shit show isnt it

StarWolf

Enjoyed the chapter! Thanks!

Name not found

I’ve seen this interpretation of the uncanny valley before in fiction and I’ve always enjoyed it. I love the eerie dread the interpretation brings. It’s very well done here as well. Also, it’s good to see Urchin has become quite the suave and imposing figure under Ari’s tutelage.

L Pedersen

It's nice to see how far Urchin has come. As Ari's vampire subjects go, Melusine gets most of the spotlight in the story, I'd love to see more of Urchin and Doe. I also wonder if or when Ari will find another vampire to take under her wing, someone she met in europe fleeing to the new world to escape a horrible fate perhaps? Oh btw, the roland vampire who took over during the werewolf arc, does she look to Ari for leadership or is she under someone else? As I recall she was a courtier then and I doubt she's become a master since.

Muspellsheimr

I very much like how it is portrayed here, and in this context makes a great deal of sense. That said, it is likely the uncanny valley is not true, based on a flawed premise. I suggest watching this video - well done, interesting, and makes strong counter arguments. https://youtu.be/LKJBND_IRdI

Alex Hignett

Loved the Sheridan and Urchin parts!

Mecanimus

If anyone is interested, the uncanny valley is a recent concept: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Uncanny_valley

Mecanimus

The ranger is Sheridan, the mage is one of Sinead's bastards.

MacDB

Who’s the ranger and the mage daisy? He’s old like Sheridan but I don’t think talked like him. New characters perhaps?

Mecanimus

First patron, first comment!

Svensonsen

First and thx for the chappie


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