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132. Snapped shut

🕑 Added 2021-03-23 09:54:03 +0000 UTC

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Deinos

Hmm I find it quite unlikely that no vampire died through those traps.

Mecanimus

Yes I have corrected versions I have not yet uploaded sry. Editing is hard T_T

Stephen

Correction "Out of the three or found hundred impostors converging on the manor, more than a hundred have perished in the span of twenty minutes. " should be "Out of the three or four hundred impostors converging on the manor, more than a hundred have perished in the span of twenty minutes. " ?

Mecanimus

Ah, the poetry,

Mecanimus

I'll edit it's a good point

Mecanimus

I'm sorryyyyyy

Mecanimus

And thanks for your support!

K Hilliard

Heh, or he's scrunched up in a crate labeled beans.

Enzo Elacqua

That’s the image I was looking for, thank tou

Jonathan

Great chapter! Really wondering if that gaudy carriage doesn't have like a sealed hidden compartment with Orpheus in it. That and Const. basically only has 3 lords / powerful fighters with him now. Even more risky unless Sophare is pulling another trap.

RottenTangerine

Great chapter, thanks for posting! This story is always a blast to read

Lictor Magnus

I want her to keep this going with this an evolve it with the times. First she get an ironclad, then some sort of submarine or light cruiser. Finally she either she dips her toe into sky piracy.

Falxie

And we love it xD

Adrien Léonard

I could not help but imagine the two golems as dwemer centurions.

Adrian Gorgey

Arianne, no matter how powerful she gets, will always be silly at heart ❤️

BramBora

Hello, Thank you for the chapter. I think I like the protegee thing, tho it does need more story before getting there(Not that I dont expect that there will be, just... yeah). Also pretty please change the fire spell thingy. It is terrible.

Andrew

Thank you!

crusaderstar

Love the chapter! One note, I think the mortal sections ought to emphasize more this is at night, in darkness. E.g. they scrutinize the horizon for a signal, maybe mention what the night looks like? Some of the ship battle scenes (which are so fun!) Make it seem like the mortals have perfect night vision.

Joel Bullock

I love the Dread Pirate Ariane bit so very much

thkiw

The bois are scared, they have to surrender that which they should not, for they are prey. Scar tissue flown on the aftermath of a hundred battles, the gates were raptured, and the tides are calm once more. Oh innocence - the sakekeeping of the naive. A pureblooded vampire roams the seas, scouring for more.

Young Youghurt

I thought that maybe Ari would outmanoeuvre Konstantin by his own accords. Wouldn't be probably as much fun as an epic boss fight but Meca is capable to make it work. Ultimately I think this shows Konstantin's inteligence and character very well. He might be only passable vampire authority and not overly political and more interested in magic but giving these responsibilities/powers to someone who wants them and is capable is a sign of wisdom.

SunderGoldmane

Yesss surrender all the booties to ariene.

L Pedersen

Reading through this chapter I was getting a bit annoyed with how chummy Ari and Constantine were considering that Ari's ultimate goal should be to mount his head on a pike but then Willhelms comment took me off guard. I too had never considered a peaceful resolution. Still though, even if Constantine gets to live I'd still like to see Ignacy suffer.

Alaine

We all love the dread pirate ariane :)

Jon

Beware, for the Dread Pirate Ariane sails the seas once more!

Vegetables

Thanks for the chapter. Found hundred > four hundred

Lowe K. Lyesmith

Thanks mate! ❤️


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