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The Calamitous Bob 39: Back
🕑 Added 2021-03-26 04:08:49 +0000 UTCComments
Falxie
FeelsSadMan. Hope they can fix their relationship.
Nicholas Paterson
Some quick edits: She was in good hands -> (needs an extra space) Viv headed straight to the spotted feather -> Spotted Feather to cross that line from someone from another world, -> that line with someone(?) when you were dragged in our world -> into our “You assume that you know what i want.” -> what I want."
Mecanimus
Yeah sry I already saw that. I'll probably reupload the chapter with all corrections implemented.
Scyfe
Thanks, Wording is a bit awkward in "You have been in this word for all of two months, and I have been here for close to twenty." does she mean 20 years?
Andrew
Thank you!
