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143. Induction

🕑 Added 2021-06-04 15:03:18 +0000 UTC

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Venalitor

Geez, they spent, like a quarter of the chapter just stroking Ariane's ego.

BurnNote

Fair, it is hilarious

Mecanimus

Of course, just as every member of a team should be able to be sneaky. But it was just too funny lol. If there is ever an anime or cartoon made from this series, this passage will be a flashback of every explosion and fire pig with Verdi's Dies Irae in the background.

BurnNote

The listing at the end is a pretty clear show of how Ariane prefers to solve her problems, but it's kind of incomplete. I mean, amassing enough important information to buy the help of another group in escaping your masters is pretty sneaky, and she also survived as a fresh courtier on her own without anyone tracking her down.

Mecanimus

I'm afraid she is not giving compliments lol.

StarWolf

I am tempted to suggest an additional paragraph slipped at the end Ariane’s successes… something like…. “….and let us not forget your most recent display in dealing with the hive swarm. Almost entirely on your own, you dictated the place of battle, enlisted trusted allies to carry out your design for the fortifications and defenses, recruited to your side mortals and differing communities of supernaturals. The battle plan has all of your hallmarks; a well equipped force, excessive firepower and a brutally efficient plan of battle, effectively carried out.”

StarWolf

“…Roman influence in my guests, “I present to you…” should be hosts. “ weakened lord, which you killed.” ‘….Whom you killed ….’ would be the correct phrasing.

Mecanimus

There are the two first books in physical format, yes. Up to the end of the 1812 arc.

Mecanimus

You don't seriously expect this to be the LAST oink, do you?

Mecanimus

Thanks a lot, I forgot but I think I reuploaded without the mistakes this time. It always takes me a few days to clean the chapter after release. Btw you can drop those on the Discord channel if you wish, otherwise here is fine. Also you're probably the first person I know came from Amazon and not Royal Road lol.

Mecanimus

Originally it was Anatole who started it all by requesting the kill order though. And he's just adorable so I dont mind.

Mecanimus

Noice.

Trollballz

That was fantastic, loved it.

SunderGoldmane

Nice ending, love it

L Pedersen

While I agree that Anatole needs to suffer I find it strange that she would put the blame for her torture on him. Constantine is that one responsible for that. It was his word and will that carried it out, Anatole's machinations only provided him with the excuse. Also I hope you're well and that the little one is keeping you up at odd hours!

sinergistic

Great chapter, I'm a recent reader (Arrived here through the amazon books, a review hinted that the stories had been posted online previously). I hope editorial feedback isn't too annoying for you, not sure if you have a process for that and would prefer such feedback in a specific venue instead of a comment. "Hmm. I propose that we stopped here." > Stopped -> stop "A few applauses echo throughout the tiers." > I'm not an English major, but I don't think 'applauses' reads well. For it to make sense, they would have to applaud, stop, and applaud again? A scattering of applause, scattered clapping, a few onlookers applaud, light clapping, or similar captures what I think you were aiming for. "Those are attenuating circumstances" > I believe extenuating is normally used in this context. " ... familiar with the concept of mind palace, ... " > of a mind palace " ... seen someone trap another’s spirit quite thoroughly ... " > quite so thoroughly " ... He has many scars from his days as mortal, most of ..." > as a mortal "Brambles and thorns from walls lash as he passes by ..." > Maybe this is just nit-picky, but '... walls lash' seems open-ended. Lash _out_ or _at him_ might conjure more vivid mental imagery. Thank you and hope you have a good weekend!

Bum-Sama

Great chapter! Thank you .

Andrew

Thank you!

Jon

The flaming pigs have their last oink!

RageBone

Marvelous. Are there physical books available? Can't remember anything. A general Info section for such stuff might be a good idea. I think you took your time with this chapter and kept us waiting. And i think you should build on that especially with your spawn deserving of your time. All the best and you have my support.

Name not found

Nonsense, Ariane would make a great infiltration specialist. After all, she’s just following the Hitman rule of infiltration: You can’t get noticed if there’s nobody left to notice. It also helps when the location you’ve infiltrated has been left as a smouldering, crater pitted ruin. Why bother hiding the evidence of your infiltration when you can blow up all the evidence?

Lictor Magnus

The knights just messed up. They asked her not to use explosive but they didn’t mention the flaming pigs 🐖 🔥😂

Mecanimus

I always mix them up.

Mecanimus

Who knows!

Young Youghurt

So will Ari meet her russian cousin?

Chivatha

fantastic chapter as always. one nitpick though. "He looks like a benevolent master-at-arms, but I am weary" should be "He looks like a benevolent master-at-arms, but I am wary". to be weary is to be tired to the point of exhaustion whereas wary is suspicious. exact definitions may vary but that's the gist.

Sassy

The pigs you set on fire always come back to bite you in the ass. Should have taken Jimena's advice, Ari.

Mecanimus

There are a lot of catastrophic successes, yes.

j0ntsa

That last line was priceless

Joel Bullock

Brah her operation history was fucking great

Scott P

Amazing chapter, love them getting to know her. I'm really looking forward to this arc, seeing her in a different setting and how she works in a more formal team.

Jed Wolfgang

Rubble and ash

Jed Wolfgang

Lol

Bunny Waffles

Ariane is the very best at stealth. After all, no one can report you if you don't leave any witnesses and anything that might have your prints on them has been reduced to rubble.

Archaea2567

Thanks for the chapter !


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