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A Journey of Black and Red 145. Surface tension

🕑 Added 2021-06-16 13:15:28 +0000 UTC

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StarWolf

I agree when reading book 3 and Ariane reached master rank she was using spells other than Flay

Mecanimus

My pleasure!

Rondel

XD

GhettoViking

I gotta say: Journey is MY JAM! Keep up the good work! 😊

Pierre Steiner

Good point, she may even find some strong control spells that she will struggle to master, making for a nice power up setup later down the road? In the meantime, playing with the library's spells sounds strong enough for her magical ability

Mecanimus

Excellent point hmmm

Mai0e

Man I would realy like her to use some more spells from Niraris spell book. Flay is good, but if that is the only spell she learned from that book she looks somewhat unimaginativ. Now that she has time, she should open the old book again.

j0ntsa

i'm not 100% sure but i think this has roots in that she knows she is not the same Ari as mortal her soul is gone, she is copy of that sustained by Watcher.

MacDB

I’m confused where this whole aura/instinct imbalance has originated from, because I thought she was always one of the vampire’s more in tune with their nature throughout the story. Plus she was working on aura control significantly with Sinead a long time ago. What’s changed about her throughout time that’s made her so unstable? it’s not like her life’s been more unstable, it’s actually become more stable. Or has she had some misconceptions about herself and her nature this whole time?

Mecanimus

My pleasure as always,

Mecanimus

:0

Mecanimus

Ok. I admit. I'm pantsing that arc.

Mecanimus

editing mistake!

Lictor Magnus

I think Octave is about to help her out lol

SunderGoldmane

She seems sexually frustrated by getting these hunt teases in.

Andrew

Thank you!

Mani

"“You are picking up the technical aspect very fast, as we are wont to do. Unfortunately, the emotions do not convey,” a mortal with short brown air informs me, speaking French with a strong Russian accent. She blinks and averts her eyes" what? its in cursive so I assume she's speaking akkad. Also she says we when referring to vampires. But then you describe it as a mortal woman speaking french is it supposed to be a vampire? or a mortal?

StarWolf

I don’t mind a shorter chapter now and then. I appreciate your big fat chapters! Mixing in a shorter one now and then mixes things up. Question: How many chapters do you expect Ariane to be with the knights? Or do you just write till you have told the story and then turn then corner?

Kyle Pemberton

Enjoyed the chapter none the less.

Vegetables

It was delicious however. So thank you :)

Mecanimus

Is smole because my Bob writing binge melted my brain sorry :/ will need some time to recover.


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