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146. The Crimean Vacation

🕑 Added 2021-06-23 18:00:34 +0000 UTC

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Mecanimus

Enjoy!

Tehd11

Jesus, this came out in June! Glad I was finally able to become a patron of the arts :). Now, if you'll excuse me, I've got a story to binge.

Mecanimus

I really like doing those on occasion, just to remind everyone that Ari's perspective is peculiar.

Michael

Outstanding! These occasional parts from other perspectives are just as impeccable as the regular chapters but provide some additional depth to the world we get to experience. I love it

Mecanimus

Much appreciated! This one was inspired by Lovecraft.

Parry Henis

Thank you. This was a wonderful chapter. A real pleasure to read. Your word- and stylechoices are on point!

Mecanimus

A good point but first, I think people with strong anti-gay sentiments won't like my story to begin with, and second, fuck them.

Jason Bryant

Loved this chapter, however I’m wondering how the general populace will react to a mlm relation. I know Jimena and her Vassal are in a gay relationship, but the readers on RoyalRoad are the type to like femalexfemale relations, then dislike malexmale. Hopefully when it releases to RR it doesn’t get downvoted because of it.

Lazy Lemon

A pleasure to the eyes and the mind as always, thanks

Mecanimus

Glad to hear it, change of POV always seem popular.

Mecanimus

Katalepsis might be your thing. Also, I listened to Dagon while writing the chapter lol.

Mecanimus

Thanks for the support! Wish I could write faster.

David Hall

I fell to temptation. Yay rereading for thext several months

Lorcogoth

the lovecraftian nature of this chapter is just delightful, I think I asked you once before about other books and web-series in a similar style but they are so far and few between.

Kota

Immensely enjoyed this change of perspective, with its own style and everything. One of the best chapters I've read in quite some time.

HighterDK

That was probably one of the best chapters so far. It’s so much fun when we see what Ariane is truly like.

Mecanimus

It takes a human perspective to mark a true monster, I find.

Mecanimus

White people really. I mean even the ancient Greeks settled there.

Mecanimus

;)

Mecanimus

100% accurate as I was trying to imitate the style in Dagon.

Mecanimus

Thanks, it means a lot, and the complicated words are because I was emulating Lovecraft and the old bastard loved them ;)

Mecanimus

It was a hard write lol. Glad that you enjoyed it.

Seri

I always enjoy having a different PoV every once in a while. It's easy to lose perspective of the main character when the story is always from their view .

P enyuk

What is it with smelly savages from Muscovy invading Crimea? Why has his been a trend for centuries?

SunderGoldmane

Oh I both envy and pity you.

SunderGoldmane

An interesting change of perspective, I’m glad you titled it in the beginning as a pov belonging to someone else.

Kriss

Thanks for the chapter! Just caught up and the wait hurts real bad. Just wanted to express how much i am enjoying the story and i cant wait to see where it goes next!

Andrew

Thank you!

Ruben

It probably also has something to do with not having a vassal to ground her more human side.

Chivatha

while i'm glad that such pov changes are not the norm i can't help but enjoy the lovecraft-esque vibes i get from them. so satisfying.

Weldt

I love seeing her from a different perspective since I always see her as a bit of a blunt instrument but with a different perspective you get to see how seriously scary she really is not a young puppy hungry for entertainment. One of your best chapter with how it was written you really felt how the person felt and like he was some sort of social awkward outcast and how much he "hated" himself... that's how I felt how he was and the end of the chapter was brilliant when she threw the facts into his face. I usually read the chapter on my email and rarely go to comment since it is bothersome I only come here when I dislike something or like now when I am utterly fascinated by a chapter. that chapter has made me start to use complicated words you put my head into a strange place :þ

Heraclitus

I... don't remember Ariane being such a masive dick. Maybe it's due to usually seeing thing's from her POV or just being stressed, but hot damn.

MacDB

‘Even at night there are only shades of grey’ - wow, I love that line

Paul Matson

Thanks! That was a fun read.

Bunny Waffles

As always, I thoroughly enjoy these chapters from another POV and the different flavors of classic horror that comes with mere mortals stuck with the eldritch knowledge of the true darkness and timeless monsters that lurk there.

Young Youghurt

Thank you! I was just thinking: "what a slow day wish journey came out."

Mecanimus

This one was experimental. I hope you enjoy(ed) it!


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