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147. Fraternal

🕑 Added 2021-07-01 09:51:56 +0000 UTC

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Arlano

Didn't she drank Urchin before Vanheim?

Mecanimus

Editing right now.

RageBone

"It is an emotion that we do not experiene very often, if only because there are few losses that can cause it." shouldn't it be "experience"?

Mecanimus

I am genuinely flattered that you like my stuff enough to take that step and support me. It's thanks to you that I can keep writing. By the way, now that you have fallen down the rabbit hole, remember my colleagues mahahaha.

9mur

I almost made it and waited until there was another chapter aside from this one, but alas, the thirst was too much for me to bear. Great stuff! Never once did I regret to join your Patreon even though it was my first paid subscription.

Mecanimus

Man this will take me another three months to reach that, at least.

Knightfire

Easily one of my favorite stories...I will read Bob at some point...saving up to binge when it gets to 100 but its amazing how human these vampires are.

Mecanimus

They will work something out don't worry.

Mecanimus

Welcome to the eternal wait though ;)

Mecanimus

I never considered the question but most likely yes.

Bum-Sama

Great character right there. I can understand his approach to conquer himself and consistently improve his own image. I wonder if this means his mind palace and defenses are some of the strongest in the world? Great chapter.

GhettoViking

I friggin LOVE this story!

Joel Bullock

Dope I love his personality

Saline Salute

does she only get the one power? seems odd for a bloodline based on variance.

Mecanimus

She already has the Vanheim essence I'm afraid.

Mecanimus

I messed up. Will edit.

Mecanimus

No I fucked up, I'll edit by saying that it was not exactly legal.

StarWolf

Good points… but I think the author said history was diverging at the start of the US civil war…. But did the divergence spread this far is the question. This probably something the author will need to fix / explain. But what he is doing is pretty hard. I know I keep knocking him for the dialogue… people just do not realize how differently people spoke just 100-150 years ago. Much more formal, no slang…provided you where educated. And Ariane is certainly educated and in no way wants to appear a country bumpkin.

Gardor

Awesome character, looking for to reading more of him

Krokozor

Good chapter, but Poland lost independence in 1795 so at this point polish nobility wouldn't have ability to call sejm and elect king. If you want to keep it this way them it would be nice if you explained somewhere in future why Poland is independent. Has it never lost its indepence? Has Napoleon won and duchy of Warsaw became Kingdom of Poland (though that would make whole Europe alt history)? Has Prusia and Russia agreed to grant independence to Poland at congress of Vienna for some reason? Maybe one of uprisings actually succeded

Andrew

Thank you!

Jerzyjjje

Quite interesting chapter, but you know that Poland in 1860s was split between Prussia, Russia and Austria, right? Which means such gathering of nobility would not be legal and their decisions would not be binding

Gwendolyn Simmons-LaRose

~~Also, where's wolf Ariana?~~

Gwendolyn Simmons-LaRose

Good stuff this one... Though is he gonna train her in her spare time or something?

Ulbert

As always a great chapter.

Kyle Pemberton

Quite an interesting ending. You've tickled my curiosity here.


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