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A Journey of Black and Red Glossary 2.0

🕑 Added 2021-07-02 03:58:05 +0000 UTC

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Alkoholest

Wasnt that vampire with that nightmare world during that vampire war part also from vanahaim bloodline ?

Adrien Léonard

You say Octave is second only to Nirari, but how would he fair against Cadiz if he hadn't left?

Mecanimus

Quite true. Added him.

Mecanimus

Hmm it's more of an abstract thing so I'm not sure I should add it as it could be confusing.

Mecanimus

Added

Mecanimus

Corrected

Mecanimus

Should be fixed

Lorcogoth

I feel like leaving out Cousin Okri from the Dvergur listings is both fair and an insult at the same time.

SirPavlova

Then again maybe you'd rather keep the essences of the other bloodlines secret for now. I reckon the ones that have been revealed should be listed.

SirPavlova

The bloodline descriptions describe powers & characteristics, but they don't list the essence of each bloodline. Ari often thinks about how "the essence of the Nirari is conquest", and we've seen how that essential *concept* affects them in ability and temperament. The text hasn't actually spelled out all the essences of the bloodlines, but I'm pretty sure Jimena once told Ari that the essence of the Cadiz is focus.

SirPavlova

Ah cool. Yeah I knew it was mixed blood but I thought it was specifically her blood that did the trick, what with being a princess. The way Sinead talks about her gave me that impression too but maybe he was just deferring to rank or skill.

Wolfclaw

You missed the progenitors in the list of vampire rankings

Kyle Pemberton

"Masters start waking up before dawn." should be "Masters start waking up before dusk."

Mecanimus

No, she is more of a researcher. It was their blood not just hers as well but I'll edit to reflect that.

Mecanimus

Done!

SirPavlova

Isn’t Sivaya way more powerful than Sinead? And it was her blood that boosted Ari into masterhood.

SirPavlova

Same with Loth, though different text.

william wallace

A general overview of the levels/ranks/life cycle of a vampire would be nice. Maybe with a description of there general social standing/responsibility and the basic abilities that are a vampire is expected to acquire and master at each level

Mecanimus

Oh yeah, adding him rn

Mecanimus

Editing

Ryan

Is Sinead in there twice? Once in the fae and once at the end

Mecanimus

I'm updating the doc as people comment.

Mecanimus

He's a Roland. Added everyone you mentioned and will reupload. Basically I'm adding whoever people mention.

MacDB

Wasn’t the new American knight commander a kalinin?

Mecanimus

Ooooh thanks, I'm adding them rn.

Mecanimus

Yeah it's full of holes rn but I'm working on it.

Mecanimus

I'll add it under her character thing.

Is there a list of notable bloodlines and powerful creatures Ariane has gained blood from, and thus access to those abilities?

Bunny Waffles

Didn't he pass after the battle against the dead God's ravenous abominations?

Devourerofwords

When did Frost die?

Tarodan

How many minor characters do you want to include? Any of the merfolk, either from the Mediterranean or the Gulf of Mexico? Constantine's torturer? Any notable werewolves? And out of curiosity, what bloodline is Octave? Or is it still secret?

Still missing the freshly-woken Lord that Ariane killed, as well as the other Bingles. Also the Herald and the lil Likaean guy Ari rescued (not Sinead), uhh, court of keys or something?

Gardor

Thanks for this, it's been getting a little hard to remember what each bloodline does when reading those throwaway lines like "and like all Cadiz he was good at chess".

Aapjuh

also am i missing Ariane's 2nd vassal or am i blind as usual?

Aapjuh

Vanheim: Progenitor is unknown. followed by Vanhein: the mysterious progenitor is he just not know to the vampire world but only to us through Ariane? also Vanheim: is missing bold+underline


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