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151. The World Reavers

🕑 Added 2021-07-29 14:06:32 +0000 UTC

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Henrik T.

Stubborn foot and clenching jaws Downward boot and closing jaws you said one should be maws, though my autocorrect insists on laws.

Name not found

“Yeah. All right, you primitive screwheads, listen up. See this? This... is my BOOMSTICK!” - Ariane.

RyMann88

I mean, maybe as a last minute thing could work. OP characters are fine, and Nirari is dangerous because he's so OP. It could still work as a reminder why a certain gaggle of lovable immortals wants to get rid of him. I think the big issue was WHY he was there in the first place. Him just kinda showing up did throw me off, personally, but it could still work if you comb through his various reasons for doing anything.

Alnatura

That sucks. Of all the billions of worlds you could reach by a portal the people on the other side are useless for Ariane. Is this a message fate?

Mecanimus

Sadly, they have no blood. :/

Alnatura

Ariane forgot to devoure them. Why hasn't she done it? Eat them Ariane it makes you stronger, think Ariane think . Ps: how OP are these people?

BramBora

While I believe that you try your best every time, you shouldn’t try to make every chapter “the best one”, that isn’t how it works. Tho to be fair, you apparently know what works better than me already. This is one of the best novels I have read in recent years.

Mecanimus

Big and hot.

Mecanimus

Kind reminder that Ariane IS the military industrial complex in my setting and that not only would she love railgun, she would build herself a portable one.

Mecanimus

I have reconsidered Nirari interventions since the apex chapter which I intend to rewrite. People are right to say that he removes the stakes because he's pretty much unstoppable.

Mecanimus

I try! I try every time.

Mecanimus

You are entirely correct and this is one of the few erroneous elements I allow myself. To give an example, an other incorrect element was mentioning Oscar Wilde in the 'Crimean Vacations' chapter even though he was 15 at that time. The purpose for me is to tell people with no idea about Austria at that time that it was a multi-ethnic empire. It is an approximation I allow myself for this purpose. As for the lack of mixed units, small intervention forces usually have several kinds of troops, like in the Mexican-American war so I think this is actually ok.

Mecanimus

Yes... Such a good question.

Mani

i wonder how much power Ariane is gonna have in the knights by the time she's done with them XD

Sean Field

At this point, I'm just willing to say most everything that's historically different from our world is due to the diverging timeline starting around the civil war. Who knows if the armies would have joined together to unite against the larger threats imposed by magic? Maybe it was unintentional, bit that's what I'm going to roll with :) Either way, thank you for the chapter, dear author!

Vegetables

Instead of gunpowder it would be the lovely smell of ozone

Mitch

Is another small thing, but the kuk army was segregated by language, a brigade would be comprised of one ethnicity, with the officers knowing the language of their subordinates. The army was also divided into two different formations, there was an Austrian half and a Hungarian half. The Hungarians in particular were very insistent that their armed forces were not deployed outside of the Hungarian half of the empire, ergo, Croatia, Slovakia, transylvania and Hungary. In Galicia, were, where this chapter is set the garrisons battalion would likely be either german, Czech or Italian. The officers would likely be germam, Jewish or Czech. Also at the time a battalion would be of either, infantry, calvalry or artillery. Their would be no mixed formation.

Lasne

Thanks for the chapter, nice fight !!

BramBora

One of your best, to be sure

Bunny Waffles

Oh I imagine he will fuck them up. After all, he can't exactly let someone else go trying to conquer the Earth before he gets his chance to conquer it first. The fact that some jumped up skeletons with delusions of grandeur think they can take his world and drain it dry should be an affront to his sensibilities.

Gwendolyn Simmons-LaRose

Ariane embracing modernity would have to... Dare I say it, wear shorts and bare her shoulders... *Shocked gasps*. But also, Space Pirate Ariane is an image that is very wonderful. Whether it's realistic space combat, or tv show space stuff with magic involved. Doesn't matter. Space Pirates best Pirates

Bunny Waffles

I could see a distant space-future Ariane on a starship, pulling a Garrus and constantly finding herself engaged in calibrations as she pours love and time into her armaments, trying to make herself the 2nd most deadly person in space, right behind that son of a bitch Sir Issac Newton. Dread Space Pirate Ariane, biggest guns in all the galaxy!

Mai0e

I wonder if we perhaps see Nirari again. This snake thing would be a refreshing challenge after all these decades 😳 Loved the chapter by the way!

BramBora

I think the lovely smell of overheating electromagnets would work well enough, especially since it could shoot a projectile so fast it would literally melt from heat from air resistance .

Bunny Waffles

If she makes it to modern times, how would Ariane feel about the wonderful steps we have taken when it comes to dealing death from a distance? Heck, if she made it to the future, how would she enjoy railguns? Would she still have good fun with them even if they don't have that same lovely smell of gunpowder and the warmth of recently fired gunbarrel?

MacDB

@Mai0e yeah but that Dvor lady isn’t even part of the order, and Ariane got her troop that mission (the mission that’s meant to make them full knights) in a manner that’s against the Knight’s rules and her teammate got killed.

Mai0e

Nah she even saved that Dvor women.

Idan tal

This world is going to see a different world war

Young Youghurt

So how big was that explosion? Asking for a friend and only for scientific purposes.

Torbjørn Nilsen

She's is going to shitt talk the entire organization and it's backwards ways.

MacDB

Her noob companions are putting her in danger with their incompetence, she really can’t keep being a knight. She’s also probably going to be kicked out after this mission anyway.

Andrew

Thank you!


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