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153. The Hammer Falls

🕑 Added 2021-08-12 13:46:24 +0000 UTC

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Overclocked

I knew he was going to toss her through the portal. What a bastard.

RonGAR

Anatole... 'what a tool he is' SMH... Curse his name. Hex on his line. And when he looks up, I hope all he see's is SHIT for the rest of his days!

RonGAR

Nice trick w/ the garther belt. Reminds me of guardians of the galaxy when the racoon asked for a guys leg to break out of prison but didn't really need it. Just wanted to see if he could get it for shits and giggles. LOLOLOL

Lalazarus

And here i was, thinking that Anatole might be salvageable. Nevertheless, it's still a hella fun development!

Mecanimus

Reynaud ;)

evyatar

A random question the plagued me! I remember reading at some chapter that Ariane had a last name? And a middle one? Maybe even two? And i cant find it so… help anyone?

Mecanimus

Keeping the locals in check through the promotion of anti-intellectualism and fear that makes them vote against their own interest? They're genius among genius.

blackzeros7

Hey, out of topic, but I was rereading the chapter posted in RR and remembered reading an askreddit about the worst US state and everyone seems to unanimously said Mississipi, and I just have to know; Which Vampire controls Mississipi? Because he is doing an absolutely horrendous job. XD

Mecanimus

Redemption arcs? In my story?

Mecanimus

Just invent time travel!

Reminder

If I read this on RR, this would be the kind of cliff where I would subscribe to Patreon just to keep reading since I can't deal with cliffs ... but well ... I'm already here ...

Blackmoon11

Pheww, for a second there I thought he actually had a change of heart, silly me

riseris

Unless the full leadership of the knight order was in on this, which I highly doubt, I can’t see Anatole not gettin g suspected when everyone but Ariane comes back. All it would take is Jimena pressing him to swear he had nothing to do with Ariane’s death and he wouldn’t be able to do that because he deliberately injured her to strand her in the coming sunlight. Like I said unless the entire leadership is in on it and steps up and prevents Jimena’s questioning. Though given the fact that Ariane is the only reason the mission succeeded, there should be a number of the higher ups even outside the knight order that insist on looking for her. I feel like whoever planned this didn’t count on Ariane’s popularity.

Mai0e

And even better, all the orbs stored in the last City. So much secondary explosions 🥳

Gardor

I feel like her revenge is gonna be bureaucratic if anything

Cameron S. Moore

Maybe he had to in order to keep his oath? Stranding her I’m the sunlight, Thirsty, is betrayal, but her dying with power readily available is just her own incompetence?

Maradrax

I hope her revenge isn't next chapter, I want a slow build up to it.

Sky

I vote best cliff. I can't wait to see Ariane rampage in the next chapter.

Aapjuh

Are we at some point see Ariane make more use of her fea magic? She's been extensively trained by the prince, or was it really only charm magic, i know she wants to hide it from other vamps but at some point 'alive > death' would overshadow that.

Mai0e

I wonder what happend inside of the protective dome if the vampires didnt breach it. Imaging the Wave of destruction coming out of that Portal but trapped in the dome 😳😳😳

Gwendolyn Simmons-LaRose

.... Damn Anatole... Everything in this chapter was amazing, and this leaves me wanting to see what's next so badly. Love the constant feeling of excitement this story gives me.

Mai0e

Man if marlan is in on it, the next chapter will be a absolut shitshow

Gardor

Pretty dumb of him to throw Kurshu down there so Ari had some blood handy. Also, with the chapter title, does this mean her new nickname is "the hammer"?

HumbleBee

Nooo, I hoped for Kurshu to be the new Vassal/ Servant. Damnit

Enzo Elacqua

Damn I really liked Kurshu, I’m glad that Ariadne at least gave him a kinder ending then he would have gotten otherwise

Andrew

Thank you!

Matthew Lester

Classic Anatole. Goodbye Kurshu I hope you thought of your tormentors burning in fiery agony.

Idan tal

It was an order from above, so he done that (with a big smile for sure)

Anghwrtais

Speculation : Anatole was under orders to get rid of her if presented with the opportunity.

evyatar

What? No they returned back to earth… after priming the bomb they run back to their gate, they used the gate structure, it was one sided, so they hid on its other side, and we even saw the result of the bomb on the other side, through the gate the bomb made a cone shape. It was described!

StarWolf

I wonder if this event will push her over the edge to advance to Lady.

BHunter

Awesome chapter, you do not disappoint.

evyatar

If she cant devour and gain from fighting the skeletons though… i kinda want her to her a MVP reward… the watcher already approves her, will the earth approve her efforts for saving it? Does it has a passive kinda conscious? Or will they take her captive because she is ‘traced’ and perform the ritual to turn her into a god or something? Because she would be the only vampire in range, all the others retreated hours ago, and she is the closest? Injured and all that?

Han Pol

Didn't expect it now.. was thinking they would do that when not working as knights under oath. Or does it only work that way when on earth?

SunderGoldmane

I smell them one hill over.

Chad L.

Curse your sudden but inevitable betrayal!

Kyle

Perfect reaction

william wallace

Where are the pigs. I believe that with that much fire there should have been pigs. 🔥🐷

Heraclitus

Anatole, Anatole, Anatole. You absolute stupid bitch.

Mecanimus

Soooorrry! But it was a nice one, I think.

Mecanimus

Yes it was a nice cliff. Not the best cliff Journey will ever have but a nice cliff indeed.

MacDB

I smelt something was up when he offered to follow her through the portal.. Ari should’ve clocked it. Are they all still marked by the undead mage? If so Ari is kind of screwed right now, forget Anetole. I can’t believe we have to wait a week to find out what happens next now 😭

StarWolf

Excellent chapter! However a bit dirty pool on the cliffhanger! Would like to see another chapter prior to next Wednesday/Thursday…. But understand you may need the writing time.

Controcetica

Very nice, very nice indeed! I did not see it coming, not at all! The fallout will be wonderful!

Mecanimus

Why would he?

Lyndwyen

Did Anatole die pls say no

Mecanimus

Heheheheheheheh


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