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161. White Cabal

🕑 Added 2021-10-09 10:26:54 +0000 UTC

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ManguKing

Why change what's good? Lol comments I try to keep short as my brain is not lucid enough or am busy at work. We both know that I should think properly before speaking hahahah thanks again

Mecanimus

Hehehe, you have extended the binge.

ManguKing

Thank you for the chapter and the hard work 

RonGAR

In this coup attempt, since it is daylight outside, can't Ariane 'assist' by mentally crushing the minds of the hostiles? One by one till nightfall? Seems like she would get a 'participation' award for that much atleast. LOL

RonGAR

She can use hasting for daytime now? That is 'new'.

Mecanimus

You are welcome!

Mecanimus

You're welcome as always

Mecanimus

Maaaagnificent

Mecanimus

It's not stopped anyone before.

Mecanimus

My pleasure!

Mecanimus

I like them from time to time.

Tarodan

I agree, I thought it looked like it began as a mental attack, then it got overtaken by Ariane's domain partway through. A man rummaging through her childhood home definitely was not Ariane's doing. A garden of thorns with a werewolf statue definitely was.

Niko

just to clarify was the perspective at the end a mental attack by the mage on Hazel?

Mai0e

Nah dont think so

Keifru

Hmmm, maybe new vassal? I imagine it depends on where Hazel ends up once the Cabal business is wrapped up.

Aurora1325

thanks for the chapter

Andrew

Thank you!

SunderGoldmane

Wonderful!

SunderGoldmane

It helps that the pov changes are still about arianne. It means the story never actually changes from being about her and instead it’s about letting you see more facets of her.

Jacob

I always like these outside perspective chapters you keep them spread out enough not to distract from the story but close enough to give use a reminder of how inhumane and monstrous she can be without her humanizing internal monologue

Matthew Lester

Tic Toc people outside. Imagine being super racist when mundane people would just as soon kill you as well.

Archaea2567

Thanks for the chapter !

Mai0e

Loved the change of POV!

Mecanimus

I may just do that. Merritt started that way as well.

Gwendolyn Simmons-LaRose

Hazel would be an interesting character to see more of, especially cause she is just bound to have a different perspective from Sheridan and the others Ariane has "recently" dealt with.


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