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163. Devourer

🕑 Added 2021-10-23 15:44:55 +0000 UTC

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ManguKing

Thank you for the chapter and the hard work 

RonGAR

BEST CHAPTER YET... this REALLLYYY gave us an insight on how Versatile Ariane's Magna Arqa could be. I hope she uses all her available tools. Even the Likeans god inside her mind space. She would be unstoppable once she whips them out.

Lethos Storms

I have been reading this for a long time and always found it well written and enjoyable. But sadly lately it feels like she's quite Mary Sue. Ariane setbacks are always minor. She didn't seem to struggle here at all. There's a lot of showmanship. It used to be earned, now it's quite expected. That she convinced Ako with a few words. A quick fight and then some words feels too easy. Sure she added threats, but Ako could have been a dangerous opponent and somebody she had to work on a bit first instead of whatever this was. I hope this trend ends soon.

Mecanimus

Absolutely 100%.

riseris

I just realized but doesn’t this mean Ariane is going to be to blame for the eventual rise of Native American casinos? It fits her MO.

Gibborim

Edit summary for those wondering if anything real changed in the new emailed version: Bunch of random typo edits. "The Devourer signature spells flies in dark arrows. They catch her in the back, in the leg. They turn her flesh dry and dessicated. She falls." Becomes: "The Devourer signature spell sends dark arrows hissing through the air. They catch her in the back, in the leg. They turn her flesh dry and desiccated. She falls." "The fledgelings behind him are in marginally better physical shape but their face show a deep suffering. They must have figured out that not all experiences were good to share, and that enough suffering members can lead to a devastated community." Becomes: "The fledgelings behind him are in marginally better physical shape but their faces show a deep suffering. They must have figured out that not all experiences were good to share, and that enough agony members can lead to a devastated community." The second passage change seems like a well meaning attempt to not use the same descriptor in back to back sentences, but the use of agony in the second part doesn't really make sense. I would suggest swapping the use of suffering and agony in the passage.

FormlessChimera

Nope. It just got edited, I believe.

Deinos

Huh i just got notified again, was there another post?

Mecanimus

Just the way I like it.

Mecanimus

Nyahaha

Mecanimus

Yes.

Mecanimus

You're always welcome.

Mecanimus

>:D

Mecanimus

should be edited now.

Mecanimus

Not this time she's not all-powerful lol.

Mecanimus

I wouldn't go so far lol but yes.

Kyle Pemberton

I don't think so, as Nirari devoured the Konstantin progenitor and he isn't suddenly the progenitor of that bloodline.

j0ntsa

I will laugh if bingles is the reason why they win against ari's sire

aqa

Typo: "Tha pain wracks him so I squeeze them more"

Leviathon251

Love th chapter. Ari was as pitiless as usual 🤣

Matthew Lester

As the number of Bingle generations increases the probability of stands existing approaches 1.

Mai0e

Fantastic chapter!

Pierre Steiner

Random thought, but is the Progenitor trait transmitable? Say Ariane drinks her Progenitor dry, does she become the new Devourer progenitor, since she's a Devourer and all? Or does it just kill the BBEG?

Epicmission

Nooo keep it! I laughed so hard when I read that 😂 just imagining Her thinking off all the pwoer! 😆

riseris

I mean even if he’s a progenitor, I don’t think he’s totally free from the limits of siring kin. It sounds like he’s basically turned his entire tribe into fledglings which would have been dozens maybe even close to a hundred in a short time frame.

Blackmoon11

First impressions rarely seem to matter to vampires, they play a very long game, take Ari for instance, her once prospective husband is her most hated enemy while the woman who bitchslapped and stabbed her through the heart is now her dear sister

Controcetica

Hm, I am a little worried with how forcefully Ari dealt with this new progenitor. He is weak for now, but I worry she has made an enemy that will be a serious problem down the line! Though I suppose she will have a long time to win him over.

MacDB

So is she trying to subordinate the progenitor or just trying to get him to join the accords?

Andrew

Thank you!

Flover

Magnificent!

Falxie

Small typo: -I smirk and cat the combat’s first mirage spell. - -> cast (?)

crusaderstar

I was surprised Ari could use magna arqua twice in short succession, also that the progenitor was so weak. Otherwise very fun!

Olof Karlsson

Thanks for the chapter!

Falxie

Small typo: -Every drip of pwoer feed the Magna Arqa- -> power

Young Youghurt

Excellent chapter as always, thank you. Hm, was Benoit used by Sephare? Like a puppet, not even aware of his strings? For some reason I just always suspect her.

Aurora1325

thanks for the chapter. she has her first progenitor subordinate

Adrian Gorgey

Small typo: 'it would not do to pursue Benoit' -> 'It would not do'


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