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A Journey of Black and Red 177: The Undead World

🕑 Added 2022-02-05 16:45:09 +0000 UTC

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ManguKing

Thanks for the chapter and the hard work

Navie

Man its getting so lit

Mecanimus

Everyone must dance to her tune and she is a really, really good dancer. If I had to use gaming terms, I'd say she buffs herself and nerfs everyone against her. It works especially well against people with unpredictable styles.

RonGAR

Glad to hear this wet noodle issue will be worked on. lol. But as for Nami, what is her MA really? Sounds like syncroncity or instant team work. I Don't really understand what its supposed to do. All it did was make Ari back that thang up and 'twerk' out of nowhere. So maybe a light kind of mind control?

Mecanimus

Remember that it gets weaker after the first use at least for a while. I agree that it's underused though and will work on it and her overall combat style in the next major arc. Also Nami's MA is really strong actually, and probably one of Ari's hardest counters.

RonGAR

Why is it Ariane's spells or abilities only work ONCE... then get nerfed and Never work again?! I can't remember any times after the first casting of Prometheus, that it actually helped in ANY way. Then there was Bolt, used once on a can or something, then useless there after. Then her ability to look into the future, or that one time where she watched the daytime battle of black harbor through the looking glass of her mental space. Use once then never again. Flay is another one, and on and on the list goes. They have a specatular intro, then are completely useless going forward. Worse yet, spells like Nu Sharran are never used to FULL potential. None of her abilities including her M-A, are ever used to full potential. Honestly, what is the point? Seems like magic should be left out of combat if they are just use for a moment of drama the first time, then a running gag ever time later. Now we have Polar Midnight... That soon will be nerfed and turned into a joke. It will go from nearly freezing an entire battlefield, to only able to give a vampire frostbite on their finger. It happens EVERY time. Big INTRO... then completely useless.

RonGAR

Poor Nami... that MA is a joke as well.

RonGAR

Idk if its just me, but is Ariane Magna Arqa being 'watered down'? Is becoming a joke ? Most of its abilities aren't used properly or anymore at all, and the thorn vines are effective as wet noodles now. SMH..

Tehd11

*Happy noises*

Mecanimus

Thanks for the support. Next chapter tomorrow!

Tehd11

Oh noes, caught up! Any praise would be redundant since I said it multiple times already on RR, but I must say, this some serious gourmet shit. I'm just glad I discovered it and got to witness it.

Mecanimus

Yes, it existed for centuries though modern tennis was invented around that time.

Mecanimus

Hah, I always say it. More quality stories help every author.

Lorcogoth

on a side note, was tennis a thing already at this time? would Ari know what the size of a tennis field is?

Desponark

This actually happend like a year ago (or maybe 2??) when I was pretty new to royal road. I think I said the same in a comment back then somewhere on your story. Since then I have jumped on and off as a patreon for lots of good stories. Yours still stands out as the first and one of my top favourites. (^_^)b

Mecanimus

I am immensely flattered. Thanks for the support and I hope I never disappoint. Next chappie in six days and I have been looking forward to that one since I started writing the story.

MacDB

So Ari’s going to fall through the portal to the Fae world, or Sinead’s going to force or trick her through some how

Desponark

Thank you for another excellent chapter. You are not without reason the first I ever backed on patreon :D

Dan K

Makes me wonder if the fae will return to help Ariane fight Nirari.

Mecanimus

I'm pretty sure she got some from the vampire who held Makyas captive. I would have to double check.

Mecanimus

Soing my best! I'm on one chapter every three days (Bob included) for now which is quite fast.

Noah

She lacks some Roland blood as far as I remember

Tilazt

Dammit, I read too fast! Moaaaaaaar! But seriously, love the chapters keep at it!

Young Youghurt

Isn't that a type of forts from around 16th to 19th century? From above they are star shaped and only advances in artillery made them conquerable.

Gwendolyn Simmons-LaRose

It'd be interesting yet terrifying to see a world of writhing roots and hedges, bladed roses galore. I am fully imagining Ariane's inner world mixed with the world of the nightmares. It'd be marvelous stuff

Enzo Elacqua

The star of world war 1 and the potential succession of Constantine happening soon. Goddam am I looking forward to the next few chapters, Arianne may just have the chance to drink a few more Lorda and ladies soon enough

Young Youghurt

A dead world and a vampire with ability of roots. Roots are basis of all plant life. Perhaps, one day when even the accords become too small, Ari could do little colonial adventure?

Constenanto

Thanks for the chapter! It's really set the tone for the next one! I'm assuming the "starfort" is some sort of temporary fort/base they constructed?

Andrew

Thank you!

Aurora1325

look a wild chapter appeared


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