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A Journey of Black and Red 178: Heist of the Millennium

🕑 Added 2022-02-13 08:53:39 +0000 UTC

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RandomPerson

He isn't very imaginative, is he?

Mecanimus

It's both.

RandomPerson

Correct me if I'm wrong, but isn't Heartseeker Nirari's soul weapon, and not a spell?

ManguKing

Thanks for the chapter and the hard work

Lalazarus

I.. I can only artfully say, "AAAAAAÀAAAAAAAÀAAAAAAÀ?!?!?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Done and done, thank you very much.

Your uncalled for attack on my productivity is greatly appreciated. I completely agree with you. I am served a prime cut of meat customized to my taste and am upset that I didn't get to eat the lesser cuts as well. I am concerned with the future of my bottomless appetite. edit: I apparently didn't know how to respond to a comment. I have also sucked up the remaining chapters. Very satisfactory indeed.

Your uncalled for attack on my productivity is greatly appreciated. I completely agree with you. I am served a prime cut of meat customized to my taste and am upset that I didn't get to eat the lesser cuts as well. I am concerned with the future of my bottomless appetite.

Mecanimus

That just tells me I need to update the index lol, you still have a couple chapters ready and the current one is, according to feedback, very satisfactory. I also agree with the short ideas but sometimes I only have inspiration for a chapter. If I were to continue, it wouldn't be that good anymore. I also love the idea that Ariane lives in a world that grows and exists outside of her. Sometimes, she's not the main character, and I love it that way.

For the last week I have spent every hour that I can spare reading Journey to arrive here to the detriment of my job and everything else in my life. Previously, Cenotaph was my favorite work, drawing on the massive Worm to reach a height of meaning while avoiding many of what I consider mistakes in it's parent work. Journey resonates with me to an unreasonable degree. There is pace with it's alternating flows between high and low stress, patient finesse in the loading and firing of plot bullets. When hidden guns are pulled, I am consistently delighted to find the trail upon looking back. Sometimes, plots are step by step examples of entries on tv tropes, but Ariane's delivery on what it means to be human make these scenes more akin to a presentation to increase thirst before satisfaction is delivered with interest. The only "criticism" I have to offer is that I see so many fantastic ideas and styles, pardon my gushing, which could carry an entire book, pardon my gushing, only to disappear before I've had my fill (like a vampire pun come dawn). In my unbiased and undoubtedly correct inexpert hypothesis, I feel like the author has been annoyed by some aspects of other works like distracting unrelated interludes, boring blocks of descriptions, and static characters who never grow. I could not agree with these sentiments more, as there is no faster way to sink my interest than presenting me with chapters I couldn't care less about, but I believe that the attempt to dodge the author's own annoyance has gone too far and resulted in a beautiful multi course meal where each course, lean and trim and probably requiring a lot of planning and work, does not fill me and leaves me ravenous for the next and dreading the day (today at 2AM) where I RUN OUT OF FOOD. GAH Calamitous Bob, I'm coming for you.

Mecanimus

I need to make a joke about that.

Mecanimus

I believe it does not qualify as a spoiler to remind you that the dead world had no Watcher until several Magna Arqa were triggered. Then it showed up. Vampire abilities were unaffected before it happened though.

Im curious to see if the watcher is still there in the sky. If not, will something happen to Ariane?

Valli'sOP

And so a new isekai begins lol Ty for the amazing chapter

Todd Kloos

She didn't use any of her statues in the battle. Is she holding back because she wants to hide her abilities? It seems like she could have defeated Bertrand if she summoned some strong statues to help out.

Pierre Steiner

She still needs 1 good deal of powerups before she can dream of taking on Niraris, I'd place him 3 to 4 times above Jarek or Octave in term of deadliness

Drendude

I was expecting the ending to be in sight for this story for some reason, but here we are with the next level of growth for our heroine instead. I can't wait!

Desponark

Wow I'm super glad to hear that. I personally hate time travel in most stories since it tends to kill suspense.

Winny

Cant argue about that! <3

Mecanimus

Time works differently but it only ever moves forward, no time travel shenanigans

Mecanimus

You are a sexual deviant ;)

Darren Li

Did time work differently in the likean world? What if she was the original fae warrior? These are just shots in the dark though.

Winny

Not going to lie, when martha started acting bashful when ariane was leading her away i totally thought she was going to ask her for coitus. Since it seems like all lancasters are sexual deviants.

MrrC

I just remembered - when she fought the Herald and she was taught to take the power of her garden of defeated foes.....she could NOT use the power of the fae. However if she is able to pull on that power after living in the Fae world...... she's be the first and only ....and shes received fae blood freely given from almost ever Fae faction......and she tends to cosplay as a Fae assassin / warrior. I'm loving where this is going @mecanimus

Mecanimus

>:D

Mecanimus

Hahaha yes, I have reduced work productivity with my nice story! \o/

Matthew Murphy

I got chills. Literal chills. Said wtf out loud and my coworkers looked at me funny

SunderGoldmane

By the watcher, when she makes it back to earth she’ll have wined and dined with a host of Fae courts and leading them back. Her sire and seimeramis will probably be the only two people on the planet capable of actually recognizing the scope of her power when she gets back. Like, any vampire bloodline would learn a lot and come back powerful but she’s a devourer and she can manifest her mind palace statues in her domain. She’s going to be so awesome.

Len

'comes back through' kinda gives it away. She stepped from the realm of the fea back to earth and that's what Arianne sees (the moment she got back, just before she goes through the portal to the fea realm)

Thorlol

'To my surprise, Naminata comes back through with bloody tears trailing freely down her cheeks. Of course, the Ekon would send an explorer. Ugh. They could have asked.' Sooo, she just took a step in and then back out? Or are they trapped together now? I mean, just taking a look cant be called 'exploring' :P Amazing chapter!

RageBone

Marvelous, Yarrr

MrrC

Well she was trained by an insane gunsmith....no issues ai think with her creating new fae guns. The Guns of Summer sounds like a novel in itself

MrrC

Good point....he figured out what was needed and that her ability to Ally with Non Vampires is CRUCIAL to eventually fighting Nirari himself

Falxie

I wouldn’t call it a betrayal since we don’t know his reasons yet

Desponark

I expected this betrayal when I first heard about the plan but the more I read the more unlikely it felt... And then it happend. You have just sweetend my weekend.

Dion Hier

This was so epic. I'm in love

Lictor Magnus

This was a phenomenal chapter and I’m excited to see what comes next. I am very sad that Arianne will be cut off from her bullet and explosive supply though. Even if she knows what to do she doesn’t have the equipment.

Cameron S. Moore

Constantine knew.

StarWolf

Ariane doesn’t need a dragon. She is building a power having to do with winter, but she is allied with a prince of summer. So if she devours a prince of winter….

Sean

Hehehehe finally! I've loved the story up to this point but the idea of Ariane just living the next century in her state playing city lord sounded dreadful. Now we get to see her back in a place where's she's not all powerful!!! New characters, new adventures, new powers(?), And most importantly dragons!!!

LenoraeKB

I agree normally I hate this trope, but that massive battle is going to be really hard to top before the final battle with nirari so I was wondering how we could escalate more and give Arianne room to grow without racing to the finish, and I think this answers that very neatly.

Mecanimus

It was a delicate balance to keep. Several people correctly mentioned it may happen.

Mecanimus

It made the cliff all the better.

Mecanimus

She IS American.

Mecanimus

PERHAPS

Mecanimus

Yes, have a little faith.

Mecanimus

Hush you.

Mecanimus

but only for a week.

Mecanimus

Of course!

Mecanimus

Thanks, that long text made me a little teary if I have to be honest. I started writing for fun and it became my main source of income but to me and to us writers in general, such warm responses to the passion and effort I put in my stuff is the one reason I can keep writing and I keep enjoying it. Trust me when I say I have been waiting a loooooong time to share this moment with everyone and it made me giddy for a good six hours, a genuine writer's high. Anyway, thanks for taking the time to type this, it made my day.

Nickolas

Probably the only time I've actually enjoyed the mc being dumped in another world mid story. In hindsight something like this was needed so she could fight Niari and the faelands are full of new, powerful essences for her as well as being notorious for time flow shenanigans.

Mecanimus

The previous chapter can give you hints ;)

shillbear

i love this turn i also like that its a twist that does not come out of nowhere

Doctor Zero

Oi, thanks for that! Most authors would have made that battle 3 chapters. So satisfying to get it all at once.

Jacob

Well time to see wondrous lands meet amazing people and eat them

Disclancer

Oo fae lands, there be dragon here... and not emaciated ones.

Andrew

Thank you!

Alaine

What a chapter, thank you!

LenoraeKB

You know, as I think about mecanimus's PLANs, it occurs to me... there are no more dragons for ariane to eat on earth, but I wonder if there are still some in the faelands, or other creatures of immense power she could snack on?

RottenTangerine

ARGH. That's an annoying cliff. Was really hoping something like this wouldn't happen but I'll trust the story to stay good. It worked out ok in Bob in the recent arc at least..

volpol

A cultivator faces the cliff of the millennium alone

Len

A devourer does best in devouring... God I'm excited for the next Arc. Let it be bloody!

Ulbert

Yeah. I believe the praising voices become louder and louder. I love to see that, as you are currently the single best author I have enjoyed in the last… ten years or so. There are always people who are better at some aspects, But you, my dear Crackhead of an author combine everything that needs to be combined for this story to not just peak above the calm waves of mediocrity, no. You manage two stories (Journey is still my favorite tho) that I believe have the potential to go mainstream. Bob probably would have a hard time as a litrpg. No. But Journey genuinely is a story that I could just give to my friends to read and I am very sure not one of them would not have a good time. Of course. I am biased. Everyone here supposedly is. But in the end, if I had the choice, this would be the only Patreon I would follow. Even when journey at some point ends. Even when bob ends. But that is for the future. I cannot thank you enough for wizarding a smile on my face every single time you upload. And as strange as it may come from someone you don’t even know their appearance of, but neither do I. All we can do is write words to each other, one in fiction or directly. And hope that they convey what we wanted them. Anyways. I could gush over your stories for another hour or two, but there will be a next chapter, which means another chance for me to Simp for a Pirate and a Faschist. Anyways anyways. Thank you.

Mecanimus

Damn that is some tall praise, thank you. I also hope the world will know our name at some point.

Hayden Leech

Hey can the watcher see her when she’s off world? Because that’s probably important.

Tilazt

God, I hate cliffhangers, I’m a binge reader damnit! Love the chapter, best pages I have ever read I think… and did I mention I read a lot? Thank you for existing

Hayden Leech

She’s screwed right? She’s the weakest thing over there.

Hayden Leech

Whoa. What a chapter. And what a cliffhanger. What have YOU done. Jerk!

This chapter deserves a standing ovation, and awards. Thank you for writing this amazing story. As someone who has been reading fiction for my entire life it is clear to me that you are a world class writing talent. One in a million, literally (pun intended). Keep writing and someday the entire world will know your name.

Mecanimus

MANIACAL LAUGHTER ENSUES. I HAVE ALL THE GALL.

Mecanimus

Such sweet treachery,

Mecanimus

You did indeed.

Mecanimus

Gonna take me a week, I think. The next arc needs some planning.

Mecanimus

I have led you to your demise... and that juicy cliff over there.

Mecanimus

Oh blood will be involved at some point, I assure you.

Mecanimus

Oh I know what I wish to achieve. People have not yet realized the most important implication.

Mecanimus

NO HEEEEEEEEEEEHEHEHEHEHE

Mecanimus

A great compliment, thank you.

Chivatha

GODDAMMIT MECANIMUS! sonofabitchbastardwritesthebestchaptertodateandendsitonagoddamncliffIsweartofuckingallheholdsholyI'mgoingtodosomethingdrastic.

Mai0e

What a twist!

Young Youghurt

Wait it's only been about stealing a vampire friend (probably for valentines)? Always has been. Dread pirate Ariane on the waves of multiverse! Honestly I love this for so many reasons but mainly because it is truly in the nature of Fae tricksters of old. No modern diluted soapy but passionless bs that most entertainment does.

MacDB

One of the best chapters of all time. P.s I called Ariane getting tricked by Sinead in the last chapter.

Enzo Elacqua

This is one of the best chapters/ stories I’ve read in my entire life, and I’ve read a lot of stories. I gotta say I was a bit disappointed when Ariane said she wasn’t going to visit the other spheres, but her Sinnead making her stay makes sense. As much as Sinead can help the vampires, I doubt the courts would just let them off after all they did, and who better to convince them to leave them alone then Arian, the master of unlikely friendships. I can’t wait to see what magic and essence she gets while in the Likkean spheres. Truly this chapter is the magnum opus of this story, I loved it, and can’t wait to read more

Keifru

"Oh fuck, the Masks threw in with The Devourer already for the final showdown. That's going to be a problem. . ." "OH FUCK, ARIANE IN FAE-LAND SHIIIIIIIIIIIIIT"

Tarodan

This chapter is truly the Magnum Opus of your career thus far. Everything you managed to tie together, from the ritual, to the battle, to me hurting myself laughing when her lecture about chromium bullets started, to Melusine's small & petty revenge against Martha. Letting her run loose and test herself against Bertrand and Malakim. I was sad to see Sinead go after almost 150 chapters of hijinks, but apparently that won't be an issue quite yet. I hope she demands her weight in fae blood for this. Surely he's got some to spare now?

Conor

You’ve done a great job depicting the character of Sinead in such a way that the reader (or at least I) is always half-expecting him to backstab the MC despite their legitimately close relationship pretty much whenever they interact, and for that persistent tension to pay off with a betrayal here just when it looked like it would end up being released forever is perfect. That said, this could be a perfect chance for her to get strong enough to stand up to Nirari without him being able to interfere before she reaches that point since she was kinda running out of powerful beings to Devour on Earth besides other high-ranking vampires. Also super curious if/how being cut off from the Watcher is going to affect her, although maybe it’ll just lead to a second Watcher manifesting in the Likaean sphere since IIRC the deal Semiramis made involved it being able to watch over all vampires for entertainment.

Falxie

KEKW

Tehd11

You know what? I'm fine with this! Completely fine. Yep. It is more enjoyable than it is frustrating, and it's really frustrating. Good job

Bunny Waffles

I swear to the Watcher I will hunt you down, shove you in my trunk, drive off into the wilderness and toss you off the highest cliff I can find. For real though, awesome chapter. Also not exactly the way I thought things were gonna turn out there hit it makes the next chapter even more desirable.

Mecanimus

SPOILER ALERT: Heist of the millennium: someone stole the MC. Ok so I have been waiting for this moment of the story for TWO YEARS, and I'd like to take a moment to thank everyone for supporting me all this time, so I could toss your collective selves down the steepest cliff of my writing career. I got teary writing this ending, trust me. I know I will never manage its like but that is okay. For now, I shall just enjoy the moment. PS: I believe this is the longest Journey chapter ever written.


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