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A Journey of Black and Red 193. A night in the life of a devourer

🕑 Added 2022-05-31 14:19:02 +0000 UTC

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Mecanimus

They got it on, of course, and for quite some time since she stayed in the fae spheres for a while.

Cyclic Addict Recovering

Can someone help me understand how Ariane got a hold of a Sinead dick pic? Did they get it on before she left the realm...?? No, right...? Or is this a fantasized dick pic? I am so confused.

ManguKing

Thanks for the chapter and the hard work

Mecanimus

I think it really brings something to the story. And they are fun to write as well.

carebear90

I too am delighted that she can use her mortal Family name again. :) I mean... it was about time that she takes on a 'new' persona/alias. Ariane Delany should have already been quite old if she had been mortal. Same goes for 'Miss Lethe'. Her using her old family name again just shows us that she is powerful enough to not have to overly worry about not being able to protect her mortal family from zealous fanatics who could try to use them against her.

StarWolf

Ariane (required) some respite after being intruded (upon) in her sanctum not once but twice in the span of a few hours…. I know where you are going with the use of the word aspired… but it doesn’t read smoothly. If you want to stick with aspired, I would rewrite the sentence for smoothness of reading and clarity.

Mecanimus

Of course there will be a chapter around that,

Mani

I agree so much. While the fae arc was fun and spectacular, it was lacking in vampire atmosphere. I love to be back in it ^^

Joel Bullock

Brilliant chapter I love POVs of Mortals that work for Arelia

StarWolf

The hoi polloi: the many, the great unwashed, the commoners, the average joes of the world, middle class and lower….

Mecanimus

I think that you only have a vampire story if there are humans to give a frame of reference.

StarWolf

Nice chapter wouldn’t mind a tour of the gallery and of course exactly what pookie is doing? Is it the entire house? Is it sleeping in the galley till it gets stronger?

Mecanimus

Sorry typo

Torsti Grönberg

This was delightful. It is always fun to see Ariane from someone elses perspective.

RonGAR

A decent filler chapter. The different Perspectives were hard to keep up w/ at some points. It was great to see her use her family name again. And it seems all her human dreams have more or less been accomplished. Nice to see her taking a break as well. Wow is our boy doe, learning new languages? Love to see it. Hmmm, Did Ari use Urchin gift/talent when she pulled that gun away? Or was that something else? Hmmm, inquiring minds would like to know .🤔 Is Ari's blood relatives going to move to Chicago from Louisiana? I think they should, bc it would be nice for Ari not to have to choose between going home or going to see how this current bloodline generation is doing. One less thing to get her off track. Maybe we should hold off on the 'Queen' Ariane talk, till our lady doesn't Yeet poo into the mouths of those protesting against her agenda or businesses. LOL Like I said, this was nice. See you next week!

Leviathon251

Thanks for the chapter

Andrew

Thank you!

Robert Hinshaw

This was a really fun chapter. Loved the little glimpse into the life of Ariane's staff. Would definitely enjoy reading more adventures from their perspective. Sort of like reading Nero Wolfe as recounted by Archie Goodwin.

Benedikt Liedtke

Great stuff as always. Pretty sure it should be "ad nauseam“ instead of "at"


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