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A Journey of Black and Red 196. The Most Elusive

🕑 Added 2022-06-21 18:55:15 +0000 UTC

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Mecanimus

More like personal floating for now.

RonGAR

Hmmm, now that there is a 'gravity' glyph, can't vampires and mages just embed that into their gauntlets and use that for personal flight??? #JustAThought

RonGAR

All good points DB👍🏽. Personally, I didn't think about the Fae angle and how it reflects on "Titles''. I don't think it will fly on earth, but if Ariane is trying to plant a world tree on earth to increase earths magically output/density, then maybe one day in the future, that situation could've happened. Too bad now I suppose. Still, I don't think its possible for another reason, and that is the fact that there is already a vampire 'queen'. One called Semiramis. (Or however you spell her name.) I doubt she wants to share. LOL

David Brims

It might have been a mistake not to take the Queen of the Americas title when she had the chance. She could still have ruled in a triumvirate with Constantine and Sephare with much of the existing structure. The advantage of taking the title is: she's a magical creature. Titles for magical creatures seem to have real consequences, and enhance their power. This was particularly true of the Fae, but should still apply to her to some extent. Also, there might have been interaction between the territory implied in the title and the Dvor bloodline ability.

David Brims

I'm still betting on the Bingle/Sinead bloodline child becoming Ariane's Servant, and fate doing all kinds of weird things as a result.

RonGAR

She was a LARGE part of Every Action. The Lynch pin! Entire Accord action or not. Give her her crown. LOL

riseris

No in my best guess, the truest thing that will turn the scales in the final fight with Nirari is going to be the ongoing Bingle stories with Ariane as a character.

9mur

Thanks for the chapter though! Especially the beginning and Sephare's bit. They were great

9mur

A tiny mistake: “Looks to me like you have what we want and you have what we want,” Prabably should be “Looks to me like you have what we want and we have what you want,”

ManguKing

Thanks for the chapter and the hard work

Thomas Payne

So great!

Mai0e

Nah, the accomplishments were a result from the Action of the Whole Accords of vampire factions, with exception of the Fae. Yes Ari played her part, but thats it. She was a part of the whole. For example the werewolves: If Constantin didnt task here, he would found another underling who would got the job done.

Mai0e

Are the Petersons the Same Family of rednecks which got ambushed buy Sheridan for stealing amuninition?

Mai0e

This chapter was glorious!

Ulbert

Did you ever hear the tragedy of Darth Bingle The Wise? I thought not. It’s not a story the Vampires would tell you. It’s a Godling legend. Darth Bingle was a Dark Lord of the Godlings, so powerful and so wise he could use the Fate to influence the flying incinerated pigs to create life… He had such a knowledge of the dark side that he could even keep the ones he cared about from dying. The dark side of the Pigs is a pathway to many abilities some consider to be unnatural. He became so powerful… the only thing he was afraid of was losing his power, which eventually, of course, he did. Unfortunately, he taught his apprentice everything he knew, then his apprentice killed him in his sleep. Ironic. He could save others from death, but not himself.

Hayden Leech

Darth Bingle.

RonGAR

Looks like Sephare planted a seed of interest in that 'Powerful Man' that caused him to desire to know more and open communications between the two species(Vampire and Humans). Looks like Sephare's method is to make the things she wants you to do, seem like your own idea. Also seems like most of the 'Accomplishments' of the vampire race, was done by Ariane. For good or bad. Black Harbor, Ari. The Wolves, Ari, The invaders from the dead world, Ari, The Scourge, Ari. The Fae, yep you guessed it. Ariane of the Nirari! I wonder when they wrote that list if they realized that Ariane single-handedly was responsible for every achievement and shaped their entire century? I hereby nominate her for Queen of all vamps. LOL 👸 Glad Ari took pity and didn't kill off an entire family. Buuuuttttt I could see if everyone was human how that would not have been the case. Those inbred hicks really didn't know when to turn off their greed. How did they plan on making deals in the future if they get a reputation of being dishonest trading partners? SMH, they were shortsighted as all hell. SMH. Good chapter, but very short. Opened it up, sneezed somewhere in the middle, then it was over. 🫤 Oh well. Nice that we got a glimpse of life outside of the current Blingery. I did appreciate that. 🤗 And just so you know, I already have Book 4 of the series on Pre-Order on Audible. I saw it pop up today and immediately swiped the card.

Leviathon251

Rednecks in this story give just about endless comedic relief. I don't know how but even the hundredth time Ariane bullies them, it's still funny. 🤣

Seri

Terribly busy robbing some poor saps of their explosives

Jeanean

"The stick detonated beautifully, sending the mortals tumbling on the ground. Pieces of wood shrapnel rained on us and for a moment, I realize I broke my rules by not taking adequate precautions. A mortal would have been more careful about flying debris." Yes, you did something wrong Ariane! You looked at the explosion!

Ulbert

With each Bingle, I am growing ever certain of the fact, that after Nirari, the inevitable true antagonist will reveal themselves as a Bingle. Curious.


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