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The Calamitous Bob 107: Meet interesting people. Kill them.

🕑 Added 2022-04-27 13:25:21 +0000 UTC

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Drew

Dear author: Respectfully, you often use the word "traits" when referring to the appearance and qualities of an individual's face... the proper word choice for that would be "features." You might say "[character]'s features showed the traits of the Hallurian people," for example, but you would never say "[character]'s traits looked haggard" or "her sharp Hallurian traits gave her a severe look" (though the latter is somewhat less incorrect than the former). Features is the word you want.

lenkite

" By staying at a dormitory...Would they allow Arthur ? Undoubtedly" Weird, it was told that Arthur could NOT stay in the dormitory earlier

Mecanimus

In three days or less, I'm on it.

Mecanimus

I'll start working in it now.

Mecanimus

He should never be underestimated.

Mecanimus

Yes that is going to be a little awkward.

Morog T Tiny

"Well the prince killed your sister who I cared for and it upset me greatly, killing her due to his greed. So I battled him to his surrender and executed him through the satiation of his hunger for gold. He had nothing to say about his actions in the end." Just imagining the phrasing from Viv.

MrAcerulez

Oh my lord way to open old wounds with that chapter ending

Gwalmeich

Solphis would never ask for money. He would only ask to keep the heads of his foes.

Leviathon251

Thanks for the chapter. Cant wait for the next bit

fbt

TFTC, it was awesome. My only regret is the wait for the next bit. :(

fbt

i was tempted to be "that guy" and point out 'fewer' rather than 'less'...but so many folks in this story end up in small pieces that arguably it's correct... :0

fennek

Awesome! Can't wait for next week.

Nicholas Grey

I dunno. She’s not really in a humorous mood. Not has she shown a tendency towards memespeak. More likely a mistranslation of “Que faire?”

crusaderstar

I think it was "what do" in the humorous internet sense since she was talking to herself.

Nicholas Grey

“What do?” -> “What to do?” (Cf “I need to decide what to do”, “I don’t know what to do”) “slammed her book close” -> “closed” “A screamed injonction” -> “injunction” “It wasn’t like half of the lower city had seen her in hot pursuit” -> “hadn’t” (half the city *did* see her, so a double negative [wasn’t + hadn’t] is required) “The rough me shuffled” -> “men” “I will have replaced the bait by mind-boggingly good sex.” -> “with mind-bogglingly good sex”

Nicholas Grey

This is possibly going to be an awkward conversation…

Melting Sky

Gotta love that since last seeing him battery drained and barely operational during the cliffside ambush, Solphis has managed to make his way to their original destination and take over a significant chunk of the local underworld.

Melting Sky

“Who are you, and how do you know my sister?” Ouch, judging by the fact she used "do" instead of "did", it looks like sister isn't aware that she has one less sibling than she used to.

Jan Verner

The chapter was a blast :)

Kotawa Ma

Guess you do have to pay the spark of luck for its help finding Arthur, even though it was entirely unnecessary. Also, she knows your sister in the biblical sense. Or rather, she knew, PepeHands.

Andrew

Thank you!

thomas j walters

For just five easy payments of 19 silver and 99 copper, you too can clean up the criminal elements in your town!

Mecanimus

Local woman reduces criminality with one simple trick.

Mecanimus

I'll go over it again.

Mecanimus

It's already been close to a year irl.

Mecanimus

Ah shit why does Patreon always fuck up my uploads.

Mecanimus

Aw come on it's more of a hook.

Matthew Lester

“Local woman cannot stop slaughtering criminals”

crusaderstar

Fun chapter, at last Solfis is returned! The Harrak Mafia is born. Also two wee typos-ungly and ennemies.

Gwendolyn Simmons-LaRose

So excited for THIS particular meeting to start. Agh, I miss Varska. The early chapters, the nostalgia, the tea time learning.

pelya

The ultimate teaser - a screenshot of a text editor.

MacDB

Wow what a cliff


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