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A Journey of Black and Red 192 Fame

🕑 Added 2022-05-25 16:45:44 +0000 UTC

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ManguKing

Thanks for the chapter and the hard work

Kristof Dohrmann

According to google it's still almost 30 years until the first Zeppelin, which was first tested in 1900.

MrrC

I think she knows that deals like this need to be heavy on bait and light on initial cost. Helping her will mean fighting the mask faction again and all of her creators forces. Those who survive will remember the cost and the victory...as well as the fact that she can cast in her own right

jay

Jimena my day one, my og, the friend in my corner always got MCs side. Love her

RonGAR

Yeah... the site was down when it first posted. I had to wait 8hours before I was allowed to reply

RonGAR

Just had to go back in history to find some words Constantine said once upon a time. “Do you have any idea how much effort I spend every night regulating petty conflicts and signing things so that we remain the Accords and not some squabbling confederation of bloodthirsty old monsters? No one, not even I, have the power to put the likes of Jarek or even you in line. It would take the likes of your sire and nobody would benefit, but I digress. Spend a week shadowing me and we will see if you truly have the stomach for it. You know enough by now that it should benefit you.” Excerpt From 177. The Undead World The part that I found important was the part where he said, "No one, not even I, have the power to put the likes of Jarek or even you in line. It would take the likes of your sire..." Well congrats Constantine, now Ari can act as the Accords disciplinarian/enforcer! The steel behind the new Triumvirtes velvet glove. Everyone knows she is fair but also pitiless when annoyed. She won't give a single ***k or a second chance if she sent after you. And she will *bleep* up your whole night when she finds you! You best believe that! LOL

RonGAR

🤣

Mark Villalobos

By the Watcher, you’re an incredible writer 🥹

LenoraeKB

I just realized, ariane now has some true leverage. She can say she will only make the airship technology freely available if a law is put in place banning the use of the word OK

Emily Gurnavage

Anyone else having trouble viewing this one on mobile? Keeps stretching the post out to the sides no matter what I try to do. Might have to download the offline version for this one.

RonGAR

I personally hope the end is still a long way off. It's all about the journey, not the destination! 😉 (See what I did there? 🤣)

Pierre Steiner

Good god this is all so good! Srlsy you have a way with words and telling stories where you tie every little bit together in one multi-colored sinuous rope of emotions and expectations all bunched together, it's splendid, it is brilliant I love it! This story has been good since chapter 1 and it just keeps on getting better the more we progress as you somehow manage to keep up the quality. This all seems to be leading to this Journey's climax and I can't wait to see it

RonGAR

How about you stop being vague and just say what you have to say. I came here to read and interpret this story, not you and your passive-aggressive inuendos. 😤 And if you have so much to say to me about my long-winded comments and critiques, why not take more time sharing your opinions with the author instead? I'm sure he would love to read a comment longer than a single sentence. Being constantly creative isn't easy work you know. 😜

Hayden Leech

That you don’t even see why is even more unsettling.

RonGAR

🤔 ? U lost me...

Hayden Leech

Man. Your perspective makes me really glad you don’t have superpowers.

A

What year are we in now? Does this line up with real history’s invention of the zeppelin?

RonGAR

Or why not demand some respect

Leviathon251

Hell yeah steam punk Ariane. On a ww1 blimp. Let's go. What year is it now btw?

Riprexe

Not four progenitor for the accord, four progenitor present, Hastling is the fourth

RonGAR

Wow wow wow, where to begin? Let's take it from the top, shall we? The title of FAME should come w/ a question mark. LOL Seems like we are still bordering on infamy a bit there. 🤔What is this about 'Martha' being the last person to witness her disappearance into the fae world?🤔 I could've bet the house, car, wife and kids, it was Naminata. Even had to go back to confirm it was. Or did Nami not say anything in order to protect her friend and that left Martha as the only witness and 'snitch'??? I also could've sworn Nami was close enough to realize the situation for what it was. A vamp-napping, given how shocked Ariane seemed by the development when the door was about to close. (Re-read that part as well) Next up: Bunch of Ingrates. (Initially anyway, LOL) Wow-what a welcome home, smh 🤨. Why does everyone feel like they could talk down to her like that, and at the same time be fearful of her lashing out? Maybe she should've poked one or two of them and let some air out of their puffed-up chest. Would serve them right acting all haughty like that. Good grief. And who was the Jerk that said “Even if you win, we would only be replacing a Devourer overlord for another.” Doesn't he/she know that those w/ 'real' Power, tend to end up w/ the Rule. PERIOD! Take your current situation w/ Nirari for example. He could've steamrolled over every faction, one by one before Ari came into the picture, and long before she got dragon's blood. He could've made a secret army of devourers and taken down your whole firm! This isn't a comic book! You are not 'owed' altruism by those above you. You better just pray they care about those around them, or else there is F**k all you can do about it. Ari was raised by the worse and best of what the supernatural world has to offer. Her Journey made her who she is. She has worked for and EARNED her place among her peers, and now her power puts her above them. But she will take her guiding lessons from Constantine, for when he was above her as leader of her sect and as a progenitor, he sought to share his power, and make his laws equitable for all. It was the best choice given what she saw of how the others carry themselves. And what did that jerk think when he made that comment? Did he think she was going to allow them to fatten her up, take out Nirari, then step aside, and let some weakling subject her to rules they cannot enforce over her? SMH you know what, I think that's exactly what some were thinking. They wanted to get a weapon to take out 'their problem', then throw that weapon away. This brings me back to my thought, that they are going to just standby and wait for one to take out the other, then kill whoever is left. Nirari may be right... these people are not as loyal and friendly as they show themselves to be. She is really going to need to have a serious backup plan. Too many small-minded snakes crawling toward her right now. Glad Jimena and Cadiz spoke up and told it like it is. "You are not "ENTITLED'' to any other results than the ones you joined for!" That was PERFECT!!! Tell'm girl! And wow, Cadiz and Ari are friends? Wow didn't know it since he wasn't there for any of her most harrowing trials and tribulations outside of her sword lessons. That aside, Looks like the Cadiz are Drunkenly happy to have their progenitor back. Happy for them. And you mentioned 4 progenitors for the Accord. WHo is the fourth??? There is Constantine, Ako, and now Cadiz. Who is the other one?🤔 THE THING THAT NOTHING HUNTS: Yesssss, Our girl put the beat down on them all at once! Love, Love, Love to see it!!!!🤩 Love the group challenge!!! Love that she and Jarek got into a MA bare-knuckle brawl and he got his teeth handed to him in a bag!!! 😂 I would've showcased that whole thing a bit differently but either way the point was made. Our girl isn't a one time wonder or a one-trick pony. So you better bring it!!! I guess the next thing to see is where Cadiz stands among the progenitors and swordsmen. Lets see if we can get some ranking on that! 🤞🏽 Wait a sec... WHY is nobody freaking out about these statues/avatars in the battlefield? Haven't they figured out yet, that if they gave Ariane blood, or if she took it, there is most definitely a statue of themselves within her ??? Why isn't Constantine even thinking about that? I thought he would've been the first one to mention it. QUEEN OR NOT? : Soooo is Ari the new queen/ speaker? Or Not. Wasn't clear in the end. All they said was they had a vote, but not the result. The Accords, Eneru, and Mask have a strange relationship, boy let me tell ya. SMH. One minute they are fighting for supremacy, next minute they are HeeHee'ing all over the place together. I guess when there is only a few thousand of you, you can't go around killing as you please. That may change when Ariane starts making new Devourer's. Which is something that ABSOLUTELY should happen. She clearly knows how to raise good strong honorable vamps. Look at Urchin and DOE. WHITE CABAL: Omg I hate these pretentious A-holes. Admittedly they were better behaved this time around, but I always get a greasey vibe off them. Like they can't truly be trusted. I don't get that with the wolves, sea people or Red Cabal, just these jerks. Ari shows respect and deference in her dealings when she doesn't have to and the wolves, sea people and Red Cabal show it in return. Only with the White Cabal does unqualified arrogance play its part. Ariane could've single-handily wiped out the lot of them when she was only a Master. And any three master vampires could do the same at any point if they want the state of NY for a domain. So why, why, why do these fools keep acting like that is not the case? I think when frost died, so did most of my interest in what happens to this group of weasels. Sure she has to take care of her friends legacy/children, but other than that she doesn't need the headache. Some need a firm reminder of what it means to face a vampire. They need to know how to show deference and RESPECT! Something needs to happen to Cull their behavior! They are just too mouthy and unruly. That aside, I am surprised Ari's Aura release didn't do more. I was thinking it was about to be an Emperor's Haki, one-piece moment, and they were all about to faint or be suppressed by the pressure of her Aura. But nope.. only a few candles flickered. SMH that was a letdown for sure. And speaking of Cabal's : What did she bring back for the Red Cabal? You know, her OWN faction??? Why not concentrate your power with those who celebrate you instead of 'barely tolerate' you? 🤷🏽‍♂️ MOON BABIES: That was a nice gift if not perfect gift for the pact. Thier history will record it as Ariane's gift or the Queen's gift . And yes, it will be fought over. But not too badly or to the death I think. Its something they all wanted and the wolves that will come from that will be powerful I bet. Enough to take on a Master by itself I'm thinking or maybe at a rate of 3 on 1 ,instead of the 10 to 1 situation happening right now. LOTH's GIFT: Loved Loth's reaction to Ari's Armor and New flying tech. Love when they get together. Brings back old times. Good times. Simpler times. They have a great father-daughter relationship. IMO. His reaction reminded me of Torran, when Ari stole the unstealable Organ for him. It was perfect. Looks like they gonna build the first Hindenburg after all. Hope history doesn't repeat LOL. Now she gets to visit Torran since it only takes 48hours to cross the Atlantic. But I'm pretty sure Torran will know that she 'fibbed' and that Sinead was a lover on the side after all. Wonder how that will play out. She still needs to do something for ENeru to make up for her betrayal. Torran stuck his neck out for her, and she killed and stole from them. And did so after they protected her from the Knights. She NEEDS to make up for that, or what is her 'word' worth?! ASSASINS: Who is coming for ARi that she feels the need to hire daytime security? And who is running that security??? Seems like win or lose, Ari is destined to be the next Nirari. Too strong to live 'within'. I have a feeling they are going to eventually push her out when she gets tired of placating them and pretending to be on their level. Yeah, that train is coming, for sure. WAIT A MINUTE, wait a gosh darn minute: Wasn't Ariane going to Name her mental space once upon a time, so many odd chapters ago? Didn't we all guess what it was going to be for the upcoming chapter... What happened to that? Did she name her mental space and I just missed it?🤨 And whatever happened to BLAKE the Roland girl from Detroit??? She appeared when Ari was challenged for her territory, and where Ari first met Jeremy. That aside, GREAT CHAPTER. Loved it.

riseris

Looks like she’s kept her world tree seed a secret.

Murigi

Ahh poor Wright brothers 😂

Gardor

They get the staff forever if they help her in one battle? Why not ask for some more permanent form of loyalty?


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