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The Calamitous Bob 116: Consequences

🕑 Added 2022-07-01 18:22:47 +0000 UTC

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Adurna

I could see that working out that way. I still find it slightly unintelligent as a way of presenting for him if he is reasonably smart but I have an easier time buying it.

Dee

Don’t tease us like this! 😂

Mecanimus

Now if only there was a reliable way to shorten the distance...

Mecanimus

I wanted to picture him in a way that he cares about the Academy and its survival to the detriment of everything else including basic human decency.

Mecanimus

If only there was a fast traveling system that allows for quick population transfers!

Mecanimus

I also wanted to reflect how powerless Viv feels because it's not like she can single handedly stop a years-long buildup of hatred.

Mecanimus

I'm sorry lol to be fair 5k words a week for one of my two stories isn't too bad, I think. Next chappie soon!

Mecanimus

I have my moments ;)

Mecanimus

It turned out longer and better than I expected.

Mecanimus

From the poor locals yes... from those doing the cleansing, no lol.

Mecanimus

My pleasure. Next chapter soonish.

Mecanimus

... Now there is an idea.

Mecanimus

Thanks for the support, bro!

Samuel

I like "Glutted"

Cormac

How will Solfis get them into his pocket? By blending them obviously. This is Solids after all.

Winny

Anyone else feel like that viv will take all the refugees to kazar? A nice infusion of people to start expanding into the deadzones maybe require some old harraken outposts and castles. Maybe another harraken ore mine. Thanks for the chappy.

Mecanimus

Yeah I should have used crowded or an equivalent.

Leviathon251

Don't worry im with you. When I said it's a hard topic to write what I should have added is 'when everyone is ready to jump on you for the smallest mistake and call you racist'. Also in terms of the confronting read, i am referring more to the rampant violence and implied abuse depicted. For some reason that widespread, somewhat inescapable violence really freaks me out and this chapter did a really good job of depicting it. It was a good read. I just hope no one decides to be a social justice warrior in the comments on RR.

Stuart Thwaites

[Heiress of the black]

Stuart Thwaites

I actually like stories with racial and cultural discrimination because of how volatile a topic it is. Tribalism is humanity's worst trait and we even do it when arguing against it 'if you're not with me then you're racist! Well, if YOU'RE not with me then you're a snowflake' so having the subject in fiction allows us to approach in a way that starves us of ''enemies''

Adurna

I am curious why the dean insists on pretending passivity is the way to go when targeted by enemies. As Viv says, it would work if she was asking for help or if at least he was actively helping against assassins and stolen research. He is not or at the very least not showing it. Also, class up is approaching. What names do we suspect? She does not seem lost anymore

Nicholas Grey

The survivors glutted on the mages and small dragon as soon as they were down - Not sure this is the correct verb? "Glutted" usually means "ate to excess" in the context of food, or more generally "supply far in excess of demand" (as in, "The market is glutted") "Viv was pretty sure it was beyond any human sort of elemental archmages but that was fine." - "short of"

Adrian Gorgey

You're doing a great job. Maybe she can drain some of this 'excess humanity', as the upper class seems to see it, into Harrak.

Leviathon251

Loved the chapter. Racial and cultural tension is always a pretty volatile topic to write about, especially today but I think you've done a good job. It was confronting to read, but not as emotionally draining as say schindlers ark, as that was based on a true story. Thanks for the update, looking forward to the next one (:

Jo

And the same problem with this chapter as with all of them........... I see that it isn't short but I'm just left wanting more xD

Adam Mesa

TFTC! I really enjoy those dramatic scene changes where it's like when Judgement was arriving: "it was day, then it was night"

Young Youghurt

No I mean how will he get them into his pocket?

uavgas

*and how Solfis will compromise with them?*

Robert Hinshaw

Intense one, and well done, thanks!

Young Youghurt

Now I am very intrigued by the ruling system behind Helock. Who is responsible for what and how will Solfis compromise (compromite?) them?

Dee

Well done chapter and a nice progression of this arc. There were a lot of things hinted at here Re: movements and motivations of other factions within the city. Curious if we’ll see the boy and his sister again. Also wondering if Viv being visible, outspoken, and providing humanitarian aide in public will garner much in the way of goodwill for her from the locals.

Jon

Nice way to finish off the day before I leave work for a long weekend. Thanks!

Andrew

Thank you!

LenoraeKB

I love Athur so much. I want an Arthur plushie

WarStrider72

Thanks for the chapter bro!


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