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A Journey of Black and Red 201: The Invisible Hand

🕑 Added 2022-08-01 03:49:31 +0000 UTC

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Isley

good chappie

Anon

I was actually disappointed that Edison still got credit in this timeline. I would've loved to see a Tesla character who worked with Ariane to crate incredibly magitech.

phantom

It is a bit of a toss up whether Tesla would be supported publicly or whether they would just take him under their wing. Though I really doubt Tesla would have followed the same path. He had too much of an impact for vampires to not take notice of him.

AgentFransis

Great atmosphere in this one. Had the VTM:B soundtrack playing in my head.

OtterCannon

if metis turns into a motorcycle I'm unsubscribing

Mecanimus

Someone requested it and it barely takes more effort so yeah.

Mecanimus

Someone made a family tree on Discord if you want to come have a look!

Mecanimus

I have planned some of those.

Benedikt K

Can‘t wait to see her reaction to cinema and television if she already enjoys opera. Arianne is either going to be appaled or absolutly fascinated.

Benedikt K

Thank you for always uploading the chapters also in epub and pdf format. Since the recent layout changes this is the only way I can still enjoy reading on patreon. Nobody else I know does that and I really appriciate the additional effort.

RonGAR

Is that girl Natalie Bingle's granddaughter? The one he made when he slept with One of Sineads bastards? What is the Family tree breakdown looking like here?

Overclocked

Will the story be going into the modern era though? And will it continue after she fights her master?

Flover

Agreed.

Flover

Can't wait for the Motorcycles!

Young Youghurt

What can I say I live a hapy life with no need to weight myself down in the mind bog that is the internet politics. What you say is pretty but it is relativizing a simple truth that a murder is abhorrent. As there is nothing you can add to that you try to jump to cc but that is completely different matter without any connection to anything that has been said to this point.

crusaderstar

Then tanks!

StarWolf

@Young Youghurt - people often react when some it cut down by one In power. Yet the cancel culture does the same thing because some doesn’t believe or think as they do. Free speech, strenuous scientific reviews, religious freedoms and freedom in general are under serious attack by the cancel culture, tech companies and other interested parties… and this bothers you?

Young Youghurt

@StarWolf I hate this behaviour. Doesn't matter if it's in a story or a real person does it. Cold blooded murder made in the name of power is and always will be one of the most detestable acts in existence. To call it merciful just because it subjectively isn't brutalising is completely missing the nature of the act.

StarWolf

Would love to see Ari take Tesla under her wing.

StarWolf

Please… humans would, have done and will do the same. No issues with what happens at the end, it was remarkably quick and clean, one could almost say kind.

MrrC

Re Edison. It is why the movie industry moved to CA. It was rough and tumble and they didn't care about parents....

StarWolf

I think Constantine would enjoy running a magical university……. I really enjoyed this chapters format. Where Ari is not the the primary narrator but shows up like she did especially in the first tale. I could read a few more of these types of chapters. Also an in-depth tour of Ari’s art collection would be fun. Also more about how the Secretary and Sephere are getting on.

Lino

You‘d be surprised how many „men of science“ at the time believed in the most absurd pseudoscience. Though Tesla in particular did not seem to be one of them.

Mecanimus

Technically there is, in Avalon, the white cabal compound. To live happy, live hidden ;)

Mecanimus

Yeah I will add an explanation in a later chapter.

Lorcogoth

I wonder, when will someone found a university of the magical arts? it seems like something that would happen this time period and it's a useful tool for containing/controlling rogue mages before they turn Rogue.

Leviathon251

Thanks for the chapter. Me need family trees. This is getting out of hand :D

Conviter

i dont know for sure, but im assuming she is the granddaughter of that red haired mage lady that sought refuge with her children with ariane in the brothel.

Winny

Thanks for the chappy

Mecanimus

(cars first)

Anybody else who what’s to see Ariane with a smartphone?

Jonathan

Probably Annie. Bingle journied in 1868 to the Pearl and it's around 1885, so Nathalie would be ~17. Annie is the daughter of Lynn (Merrit's daughter) that she had with the son of Louisa Watson and Sinead. Annie was given away around 1848 before she married her fiance.

Mecanimus

Yes it was Annie, Bingle’s first flame.

Mecanimus

I could do it. I’m considering.

Mecanimus

I will try to capture the gilded age feeling for a little while with atrociously rich magnates and so on. Also yes, the end was for the exact purpose of showing that vampires are still monsters but so was the beginning. Ariane kept the almost rogues alive in case they could be salvaged yet we know they are like that because they probably killed everyone aboard their ship.

Hayden Leech

‘Twas not. The mother was that prostitute that bingle knocked up.

Ruben

I believe it was lynn, merrits daugther, who gave away her child.

Clarence Bassanini

My question exactly, it's driving me nuts.

John B Barnes

Who was the mother of the pregnant woman?

Young Youghurt

Fun fact: Edison at one point owned the whole movie industry. As nobody could make a movie without cameras (that he had patented) those needed film (that he had patented) and of course when you were done making the movie cinemas needed projectors (that he had patented).

elijah pickett

I had hoped, but a man of science like Tesla would probably not call upon the creatures of the night. Some wrongs are righted in this world, but not all, with even more wrongs added on. With, thankfully, some good deeds too.

Young Youghurt

I really appreciate the end of this chapter because it shows mecanimus uncompromisingly adhering to his view of cold, brutal vampires, the same way that journalist wouldn't compromise on his ideals. I despise what happened at the end and at the same time I love this story even more for it. Never felt like this before. Mr. Edison? More like Mr. I patented everything that even remotely could be patented while not even making that shit up myself it's actually all made by my employees Yeeeha long live the capitalism ©®trademark of free world


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