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A Journey of Black and Red 205: Procedural

🕑 Added 2022-08-30 19:09:57 +0000 UTC

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Isley

good chappie

Winny

Thanks for the chappy, so i guess ari is going to look up every godling family that exists after this boonedockle. Lol

riseris

I’m incredibly disappointed in Ariane this chapter. She never looked up the other godling families after getting involved with the Bingles just to have some forewarning if she ever ran into their names? She’s usually better than this.

Mecanimus

You know she's been waiting for this for ages.

Mecanimus

I want to keep Ari more central in this one.

Mecanimus

Aw come on it just means more shenanigans.

Mecanimus

It's ok I'm a pro and professionals have standards.

Mecanimus

Sometimes there is an overlap and several people have godling moments throughout their life, like Cecil's children.

Mecanimus

And thanks for the support.

Mecanimus

I think I've teased long enough lol.

Mecanimus

The lack of diversity for magic can be entirely blamed on the author lol. AI was actually quite pleased with how the Silversiths had cool magic yet Ariane managed to outwit them anyway. As for getting yeeted out of a house, she can never lose that weakness. The moment a vampire loses all weaknesses is the moment a story goes to hell imo.

StarWolf

This was a great chapter! Really enjoyed this line “ Besides, one day, I may wear trousers. That would be nice.”

Thomas Payne

So good!

RonGAR

Hierarchy! 😨 There is no such thing as too long! Never utter such blasphemy again. Or you'll give the author 'idea's'. 😨

RonGAR

Yeah, but the real charm about Ari, is that she is hands-on. She handles her own business whenever possible. All the other lords like delegating that/this kind of work out to subordinates. Which is why our girl will always be in tip top fighting shape.

Leviathon251

Oh my god we have more. I absolutely love the Godling side stories. So much fun.

Young Youghurt

I think it's a herald problem. Ari is one of the triumvirs, she needs a personal door kicking, carpet rolling squad with drums and annouciator like in Shrek. Disrespect to the empress of America is capital offense punishable by burning pigxification!

Young Youghurt

Its not 100% hereditary and it's not always on, I think. For example that explorer Bingle Lady was normal until her adventure time kicked in. It makes sense that each generation has at least one and after they grow older, make family and retire their inheritor becomes active.

Young Youghurt

Clan silversmith? More like clan Shatterglass! This chapter has been so therapeutic until that godling popped up

Josh Tumlinson

Feck that was a long one. Binglrey’s and Boonedogle’s. This should be good

TheLunaticCo

So Boone is probably gay? Since godlinghood is hereditary and if the Godlings of romance weren't disproportionately homosexual there wouldn't be any non romance godlings humans left. Or at least they would be FAR more common then both humans and other godliongs

Olof Karlsson

Thanks for the chapter!

Jeanean

Please don't let there be another generation before Ariane finally gets her Servant. Else, she will have to deal with an utterly unstopable force of the Supernatural. Though, it would be funny if Nirari gets defeated not through careful planning and hundreds of years of power aggregation, but simply gets steamroled via insurmountable Karma.

RonGAR

More godlings...juuuuussst Great. Smh Like the mage skirmish. Glad to see that different factions/families/groups specialize in different types of magic. I had written human mages off as nearly a one-trick pony. Fire spell here, Ice spell there, Shield every now and then. With a trap or two thrown in. Either way, they all seemed easily dealt with. With our boy FROST being one of the few exceptions. But in this little scrap with the Silversmiths, I could see how all those defenses would have worked out on human invaders on a witch hunt. They would've run into trap after trap of glass exploding in their faces and on their skin. Even if they escaped and just Molotov'ed the house, they would have taken hella losses in the process that's for sure. Felt kinda disrespected watching our girl get tossed out like that. Wonder if there is a way to prevent that from happening next time? Can she absorb more Kalnlin blood? Or are they still subjected to that rule as well? Honestly... I would've salvo'ed that house from a distance. Or turned the whole thing to glass, then thrown a brick at it, and watch them all get buried in the rumble. But I'm just wicked like that. LOLOL

Jacob

Oh man that last bit was perfect


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