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The Calamitous Bob 142: Administration

🕑 Added 2023-02-10 17:05:38 +0000 UTC

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Vengefulcaptain

Hunger needled her but he hesitated to find food because time was not on her side, even with the disguise masking her identity as half elemental. He to she?

Kyle Pemberton

Yeah I wonder what's going on.

M. Gunnarsson

Ah. That's probably what's in the vault.

Diego Rossi

Highly probable. But if Elunath start causing collateral damage he will lose support in the city. He has worked hard to try to maintain a positive image, so he will be slow into escalating.

Amer

I legit have been avoiding looking so I could sit down and read the whole thing. But now no chapter.

T'Ericka

No new chapter this week?

Adam Mesa

Make that a third person also waiting Q-Q

StarWolf

I hope so - been waiting all day.

Kyle Pemberton

New chapter today?

Vladimir Zhivanevskaya

Noooo I'm caught up again! And on such a spicy one too. Side note: boy am I glad you post these as epubs because I really don't like patreons posting system.

Kitty kat

that last line gave me "grab the popcorn" vibes hehe

Mecanimus

She mentioned the hormones quite a few time yes.

fbt

yeah, her temper is shorter than usual (and that's realllly saying something). Maybe she's just had too much crap thrown her way lately and is out of fucks to give.

Aguy768

Looks like Viv really has to figure out what's wrong with her emotions and body. She's as bad off as she was with the cannibal kids. I wonder if its because of hormones of the new body or is she just closer to the bodyless soul state.

Melting Sky

Just because somebody is short and flat-chested doesn't make them appear as a child. Sure it can make a girl look more youthful to some degree in some cases, but I can assure you a shrunken five-foot-tall grandma that has withered down to skin and bones and as a result, is now flat as a board will NEVER be mistaken for a child. Viv is a fully physically mature woman, there is no way that simply giving her the equivalent of breast reduction surgery and making her short and thin is going to make her look the same as a young teen again. Women have a load of other secondary sexual characteristics outside of their chest size. Also, when it comes to your claim the transformation should have burned her fat reserves, what exactly do you think female breasts are made of? What would be far more ridiculous here would be if the transformation actually had somehow reversed time and actually made Viv younger rather than just consuming a load of her body mass and making her smaller.

closeded

The way you describe Viv is as an emaciated child, not a "mousy young woman." You're bending over backward to bother keep short Viv and to avoid association with your "pedo mangas." You should pick one. You're characters are behaving irrationally now because you changed your mind at the last minute. If Viv doesn't have a child form... And has magical ex machina charm to disguise her... Then there's no reason at all for her to be shorter other than you holding on, slightly, to your original idea that you let people shame you out of. Bonus points... No one's commented on her looking thin... How does that make sense, her transformation used her height as energy rather than her fat reserves? If it actually made her look younger, I could see the reasoning for saying it consumed her age, or that she was "reborn" (your words), but this? It's just a new gag joke to remind us that things no longer make sense. What would make sense? If you're dedicated to letting people shame you into changing your story? No short Viv. Period. Skinny Viv instead. That would make sense. Now. This is mostly disappointing because child form Viv would have been genuinely funny... and more importantly been a legit hurdle that she'd have to overcome that would actually make sense. Then having all of your characters go out of their way not to say she looks like a child? "Like a boy?" Really? Viv's still early 20s... Shrink her down, flatten her chest, and adults WILL see her as a child. Child Viv would have been a funny meaningful addition to the story, short Viv is an irritating distraction. You'd be better off not shrinking her at all. The irrationally of it is making it difficult to ignore other irrational story elements... Such as Abe. Abe makes no sense at all, but I could suspend disbelief if you didn't also throw "short" Viv and litterally everyone being super naive and not realizing that Elunath is a rapist on the pile of things I need to pretend make sense. \endrant I like the characters... for the most part, so I'm not dropping the story. Either way, I absolutely love Journey, so... No possibility of me dropping you.

Mantarok1205

"Hunger needled her but he hesitated to find food..." Needs to be corrected to "she".

Mantarok1205

upvote then read, this is the way...

LenoraeKB

Particularly when they themselves are disregarding said laws

Dani Zweig

Very enjoyable chapter! Of course, Elunath doesn't seem the sort to avoid collateral damage if things go poorly... and Chekov's law suggests that Elunath hasn't destroyed the cursed club.

kreiverin

LOL ))))

Dietz

It's always amazing to me when people delude themselves into thinking concepts like laws or traditions will protect them from a direct and active threat. TFTC! It was great yet again.

brandy

Hunger needled her but *She hesitated to find food because time was not on her side, even with the disguise masking her identity as half elemental.


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