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The Calamitous Bob 146: The League attempts murder

🕑 Added 2023-03-10 14:54:15 +0000 UTC

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Jaroslav Zapadlo

Fuck yeah!

Jonathan

"Sorry, wrong number." HAHAHAHAHAHA!

I am amused by the idea of Tods reaction to her just calling up the gods for a stamp of approval only to dial the wrong God.

Mecanimus

Poor Neriad. And he's Harrak's patron god now.

Mecanimus

HAHAHAHAHA

JLM

Yesssss

Eden

I think the burned/burnt thing comes from a mix of it being more common to see something like "it burned on the way down" and the fact that burnt is more widely used as an adjective to describe damage to an object rather than a feeling. Both are interchangeable here so it's an interesting bit

buca117

I’m expecting Abe to be an exception, and his survival contingent upon his will ended and ability to serve as Entikku’s hands.

Benjamin Mages

No not taming specifically, it's if humanity targets a young dragon, whether it's to capture it or kill it. Judgement does not get involved if the dragon went out of its way to pick a fight with humans though.

Doctor Zero

IIRC killing young dragons isn't forbidden. Judgement only gets involved if you try to tame them. Unless you mean killing Arthur would be fucking hard, then yes, that is daunting.

BossDawg

There is still the fallout the Dean talked about. I imagine killing Viv is one thing but killing a dragon is a much more daunting prospect. So Arthur might help deescalate the situation.

Ty

I thought Arthur was supposed to save the day but I guess her fate was truly just to get scritches lol. Also I love Viv's relationship with the gods. Its seriously ridiculous. I can't wait for the aftermath of this battle as well. After this they have to take her seriously now. Can anyone honestly call her a nobody after this. And now I'm done my binge. Its seriously a pleasure to have like 30 chapters ahead of what's on royalroad.

PickledTink

Some minor wording things and typographical errors: ---- Facing the onslaught, she teleported and flew using an annoying harness that cancelleds gravity ---- Typo: Should be "cancelled". ---- The colossus, however, was not. There were no records of Elunath ever pulling that. It could only mean one thing. Either this was a new spell, or Elunath had never left witnesses before. ---- Probably should read "It could only mean one of two things" ---- He took a gulp. The alcohol burnt the way down while a floral scent lingered, just a little bitter towards the end. ---- The usual term I have seen for alcohol is "burned" rather than "burnt". "Burnt" just looks and feels wrong though I am unable to articulate why. ---- and a third one he didn't know and who used elemental magic mixed with black mana. Those seem devastatingly effective. ---- Again, as above, I cannot quite articulate why by I feel "seemed" fits better than "seem" here. It's a bit of a tense change, I feel, if that makes sense. As for the chapter itself, it was highly enjoyable, and your choice to write most of it from the perspectives of others, but mostly Elunath himself, was inspired. It worked better, perhaps, than anything else would have and nicely highlighted his arrogance and the loss of his basic humanity. He had become a fossil, slow and stubborn as the earth itself, unable to bend and change. The further degradation of his humanity once his body was destroyed was also well written and interesting, and is suggestive of why elemental archmages tended to disappear as you revealed in one of his musings in a prior chapter. Please keep up the good work.

BelligerentGnu

Welp, if I have to catch up to present, I suppose this is a good chapter go do it on.

BelligerentGnu

I too would like to know this.

Amit Gupta

I think that may be due to "The League" intercepting his communications and Irao then posing as Renea. That might also explain why she didn't respond the second time.

Nicholas Grey

And thus “it could mean only one thing” is incorrect. “It could mean one of two things” would work.

DM

Super awesome. How do we understand the failure of Elunath’s Renea to respond to him? Not wanting to try very hard since she wasn’t loyal? Or she was obedient but he never gave her the power to be really useful at the end? Same flaw on the part of Elunath, but makes a difference to her character.

Mark

More like relifing so he gets a second chance to not screw up his death. So maybe like Nous letting you reroll your stats.

H

It’s frank now. Abe is his dead name

Albedo's Ahoge

The lick > The lich . Thank you for the chappie! Excellent beat down.

fbt

good stuff. Glad Abe is in a better spot, and E-the-jerk is no more. Plus, yet more epic medical techniques via the outlander's shennanigans! I lol'd at Neriad's response.

Winny

Thanks for the chappy, though abe getting a body of grey flesh really was different from what I expected when I thought flesh golem. But hey at least Abe gets to feel again. On that note, Viv now has the ability to reconstitute liches. What would happen if she reconstituted a lich like the one that played king in the deadlands? Would they regain their empathy? For that matter, what happens if Viv reconstitutes a regular undead? This is like a step above necromancy. Also if Viv has been given the green light to do this to abe, whats stopping Viv from allowing other mages to undergo lichification and then simply reconstitute them back to flesh? And since it was written as them gaining immortality, she has effectively created immortality. Or at the very least quazi Elementals.

Aram Ibrahim Camps

Yessssssss, abe livessssss

Hectorbeserk

Its either *one* or the other

Nicholas Grey

“It could only mean one thing. Either this was a new spell, or Elunath had never left witnesses behind” - that’s *two* things :P

Jonathan

Wait wait wait. Entiku sponsers un-undeath as the goddess of death, could Nous sponser the machine race as the god of magic and the system?


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