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Changeling part 6

🕑 Added 2023-06-12 04:14:48 +0000 UTC

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Flying Goat

Suggestions: "Your file was rather sober with details.”: sober with details->"Spartan on details"? Just "Spartan"? "sparse on details"? Sober means serious, not brief or undetailed. "rotation 3D view" -> "rotatable 3D view" ("rotation" is a noun, not an adjective) "lynching mob" -> "lynch mob"

RonGAR

Thx Mec 🤩

Mecanimus

Four or five more days until that if I remember correctly.

RonGAR

Rereading chapters...started from 3, now up to 6. Trying to piece together a timeline since that Palladian family get together was mentioned. and how close we are to it.

HJ

changeling soon? :)

Robert Sutherland

I'm enjoying this a lot as well and I have to admit that I enjoy the progression, gear, loot and dungeon portions even more than the cop side.

RonGAR

While demon Nestra was growing like mushrooms on a pile of politicians’ promises.... LOLOL Those one liners you deliver every week. 😂 There is always one or two per week. LOL

"He looked at Viv who gave him a countdown." Nice to see that she managed to figure out interdimensional travel.

Newbie_101

I am super invested in this part of the story - helping with the people, solving crimes and trying to find out more about the corpo jerks for payback. The portal-diving/self-discovery is neat, but feels like a slower burn. I am excited for the 2 parts to intersect more (when she is masked), but I am so here for some procedural and good old fashioned detective work.


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