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The Calamitous Bob 171: Sardanal's Cradle

🕑 Added 2023-09-02 00:26:46 +0000 UTC

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M. Lampi

You can have the leftover.” ==> You can have the leftovers.”

M. Lampi

The crew gathered on the deck, watching the island approach with consternated expressions ==> The crew gathered on the deck, watching with consternated expressions as they approached the island

Toni Pampliega

Next chapter shouldnt be late. Last words. RIP. Kappa. XD. Why I remembered today was friday and chapter release?!

Midjji

I keep thinking of the order of the blue rose and the comment made by the spymaster regarding them lacking tradition and therefore power. While perhaps not right now, a chapter focusing on them and their order would be interesting. Speaking of traditions, if I understand the idea right. Viv should have commanded them to make an annual pilgrimage to arthurs birthplace, the holy waters of the shrine of the neriad saint that saved her. Or perhaps to escort pilgrimages there, after telling the children of the scale the story. They are an interesting part of harrak, and in some ways similar to the samurai before their end. Thrown in a changing society they don’t quite understand, desperate to prove themselves and their way. Serving under an honourable, if absent ruler who supports them in ways unique to her, with regeneration, iron and perhaps enchantments, but does not hold the feasts and dances they would expect. No doubt they long for her to act as herald as she did for the other knightly order. Viv also expects very little of them. Giving them perhaps too much freedom for their path. Will they sink into complacency or will the the rose and the thorns rise to the challenge and become a true pillar of harrak?

David Eddy

fantastic ending line!


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