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Changeling Part 13

🕑 Added 2023-08-08 17:17:49 +0000 UTC

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Flying Goat

Typo: "Nestra managed to puncture the breastplate of the fifth try." -> "Nestra managed to puncture the breastplate on the fifth try."

kyle

I meant to say I love the development with sashimi! Also can she pls kill another gleam soon so we can confirm weather or not she always steals their affinities!

HJ

aaah sashimi! curse your sudden but inevitable betrayal! side note: my cat is named sushi cuz she's a tricolor side side note: I read about cute lemon sharks that love interacting with divers. They jealously guard their humans and chase other sharks + fishes away if they get too close!

Smaug

It's void. I think the doctor or someone talked about it.

Leviathon251

There was one spot early where you used "break upon like a rock" twice very nearby in two separate similes. That felt a little clunky but would be pretty easy to fix if you even want to.

Leviathon251

Hehe "has stressful meeting that reveals the high stakes of the current plot" worried? Frantic? No... hungry for donut.

Patrick

Heh personally I quite like the gate invasion side of things myself, though the real world stuff is good to. The only part of the story that feels weird to me is how compressed the story is timewise. It feels like the party with the family was mentioned ages ago and yet we still haven't gotten to it because so much has happened over the course of what, a week or so?

Zaeron

This is an interesting one. I think this is the most I've liked the "gate invasion" side of this story so far. Dropping us in without all the infiltration and just using it to mainline an action scene aggressively felt right to me. Normally I kind of slog through the gate invasion stuff because the real world aspect is a lot more fun. The communication with void shark is very... fuzzy... but I think that's cool for how bestial demon-Nestra feels lately. She gives off major unreliable narrator vibes in a way that makes the sort of confused, messy communication with the shark make sense.

Andrew

Thank you!

Tsorov

Or it's something an entire rank above him, a B rank, which would explain Nestras shock

Smaug

Shark has enough of an attitude that Nes sees them as kin haha. But apparently the demons are more individualist (murderous?) than humans.

RonGAR

Changeling and CB have become the two updates I anticipate the most. Loved that Nestra made a pet. Love the name too. 😂 and Ooohhh the sass. She really has a way of getting under ppl's craw. LOL ------ So this C- class that was killed, was pretty strong, yet no one noticed the battle that took him down? If there was no battle then, it seems like he trusted someone and got betrayed then found himself waking up in the next world as a human sacrifice. #justmyguess 🕵🏼‍♂️ Hope the culprit isn't one of Nestra's benefactors. Which I still think is her aunt and Dr Mazingwe #justmyguess --------- Gr8 to have you back!

Bunny Waffles

Everything will be pets. Even spoiled killstealing shark babies.

Karma Baris

oooh, im excited for the party with her sister, im really curious at what her element is

WarStrider72

Thanks for the chapter boss!


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