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The Calamitous Bob 194: The Darkest Side

🕑 Added 2024-03-16 04:03:14 +0000 UTC

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Edit suggestion: She knew they clan -> She knew the clan

M. Lampi

“Wow. That’s the first time someone implies I am very wise!” ==> “Wow. That’s the first time someone implied I am very wise!” but they have better stamina, then theyn do it somewhere else until we are enraged. ==> but they have better stamina, then they do it somewhere else until we are enraged. She knew they clan had been hit when the smoke and the birds ==> She knew the clan had been hit when the smoke and the birds Perhaps It was probably because those were just… people. ==> Perhaps it was probably because those were just… people. “Wether the kark fuckers want it or not,” the burly man added. ==> “Whether the kark fuckers want it or not,” the burly man added. they outnumbered the Kark warrior by a factor of two. ==> they outnumbered the Kark warriors by a factor of two. Those were merely growing pain while the city refocused on its sadly neglected core: ==> Those were merely growing pains while the city refocused on its sadly neglected core:

Wumpy

Thanks for the chapter. I have a minor suggestion. In something like 7 consecutive sentences it is mentioned 3 times that the raider hesitated. This part did not read all that well due to the rapid repetition. Cheers. Binged all of RR+Patreon in less than a weak. Good stuff.

wd40bomber7

Oof that was rough... Thanks for the chapter! Looking forward to the beat down

buca117

Chapter today?

Ty

Those guys are jerks

Jed Wolfgang

My fuck, that ending was splendid.

Cormac

Arthur could do a bombardment of their supply train at like 03:00. Zoom in at high speed, whizz around spewing napalm for ten seconds and then zoom out again.

Sæþór

Tftc, can't wait for the next one!

James Faulkner

He showed up to stop the fighting and then was a dumbass and completely ruined everything/almost caused an international incident because of his fragile ego

Jonathan

See now I'm wondering what she's going to do as she's already said that she won't just smash the army herself. It's 2-to-1 so she's got to do something special. Poisoning their supplies, killing mounts, and then going on airborn surveylance to stop supply lines could weaken them. Having Kark pray to Neriad could help buff too. I was thinking the land ship would work for shock and awe as a battering ram, maybe mobile archery platform, but it still doesn't seem like enough unless she draws it out. Changing them to land ship raiders could be interesting but seems too expensive. The sudden death could foreshadow sandworm or envi critter attack but she'd need a lot or a single big one.

Angus Losier

Nazis, by any other name, need _all_ the punching.

Senko

I am curious what happened to him and the officer who made the decision to attack an embassy. Their higher ups can't be pleased with them right now.

Senko

Well that's the fun thing about it being the Karks war. They won't be able to surrender to her as she wont be the one fighting.

NoReTr3aT

I fucking hope so. Let him just let go for once in a decisive battle. The world does not fear Solfis enough yet.

NoReTr3aT

*Ding* You are fucked by the way.

Alexis Lionel

I think if the author did that, the readers might reasonably revolt. For what we witnessed, there must be blood. Nothing less than a river through Luten's little empire will suffice.

Red Viking

Heavy.

John Anastacio

I wonder if Ambassador Feliserendi is still around. Feliserendi might not have been the one who ordered the attack on the embassy per se, but he certainly was responsible for the hunt for Sen Meneteleon that led to the attack.

phenebeans

If you're like me and forgot about when the embassy attack happened and how Viv got the subsequent recognition of a casus belli, it's here, chapter 167 (the attack itself happens the chapter before, in 166): https://www.patreon.com/posts/calamitous-bob-87190609

iloverugs

Great chapter. Humans really can dehumanize anything if it serves their purposes.

tr13ze

Thanks for the chapter 😁

ikbenbarry

that was rough, and also gives me the feeling that the karks revenge is going to be vicious beyond believe. I cant wait to see it

lenkite

This is explicitly specific genocide not "Collateral damage". Also, Luten can simply surrender. By Neriad's laws, Viv will need to keep then alive.

Roombot

Bet you my left shoe that “winning a just war against a human nation” satisfies the requirements for the last substep

Roombot

Sometimes you gotta write chapters that hurt. It’s good storytelling when your audience cries for fictional people

Roombot

Well written chapter. The horror, the casual cruelty, the unfeeling raiders…. The sense of impending justice after her declaration of war. I can’t wait for the comeuppance.

Roombot

The soldiers and the leaders

FuriousDee

Just the guilty

SDCard

Thanks for the chapter! Purify the world by removing the pure league, please.

Isley

good chappie

M. Gunnarsson

If anything, ethnic cleansing is so disturbing because there IS never any collateral damage.

StuBee3

Nice!!!

Young Youghurt

I hope Viv won't start changing into a giant god worm empress

Mecanimus

Hm yeah that's a good point.

Mecanimus

Viv-san al gaib.

Mecanimus

That would be hilarious.

Mecanimus

It was necessary, I think.

Mecanimus

Yes, she is still sworn to neriad.

Mecanimus

Of course. It was just an unpleasant reminder of what we are capable of.

Mecanimus

Yeah I am now but Thursday afternoon wasn't a pleasant time, as you can imagine.

Venalitor

I'm not sure the term 'collateral damage' has any place in this chapter. After all, the Pure League's agents were very deliberate in who they killed.

Ecthe

All of them, children included ?

Tsorov

kill everyone they find. They leave quickly because the pakar are not as fast as horses, but they have better stamina, then theyn -> kill everyone they find. They leave quickly because the pakar are not as fast as horses, but they have better stamina, then they

Diego Rossi

hanks, sometimes we need to be remembered that those kind of things happens. Sadly, we see something very similar on both sides today. The solution isn't more violence alone, and Viv has repeatedly shown that she can find better solutions. Let's hope that will happen in real life too.

Young Youghurt

Haruk muad'dib. The chosen one will bring peace and paradise to the steppes.

Weldt

So is she gonna release Solfis on them😁

Clifton

Didn't he only turn up afterwards to stop the fighting? And then back the wrong side?

Kennyevilmonkey

I may be a dragon, but she is my mom and she is fucked up in the head.

Kennyevilmonkey

I thought those sounded familiar... ya, not pleasant stuff to learn about.

Khent Mercer

I hates them and wants them to die badly please.

Kitty kat

I wonder if the ruler of a nation gets a notification from the system when somebody declares war officially?

Kitty kat

"I disagree, but i'll let her cook"

thomas j walters

the kids man, that uh. that hit me way to hard.

Amer

What's that? Blood for the blood god and skulls for the skull throne? Yes. Yes I think so.

Andrew

Thank you!

MrAcerulez

Who the fuck indeed.

Adam Davies

Thanks for your diligence, and sorry you had to explore the worst parts of humanity. I hope you get to spend some time hugging someone you love and remember that not all borglings are shitbags.

Manlor

Who the duck indeed!

Mantarok1205

Jolly... good?

Jackjargon

Also I hate you're logic mom but the results have always been horrific so let's do this

Jackjargon

Thanks for the chapter!

Jackjargon

Really fucking understandable this was heartbreaking to read and must of been a horrifying bucket of new information to reserch.

Tigera

4/5, one more to go

James Faulkner

Tftc! That last line was perfect 😂 the dragon slayer is sneezing like crazy somewhere

Adam Mesa

I was not aware that this was in any way inspired by reality. Terrible. 😞

The Bandersnatch

Thank you for your hard work! This really would have been difficult to research :(

Adam Mesa

TFTC!

Ripstick 12

Apology not needed, the more important thing is… You doing alright?

Balaji Dutt

Internet Hugs for you, Mec. Definitely not a chapter I'm going to enjoy on my next re-read. But also can't wait for the Pure League to have their collective asses handed to them.

WarStrider72

Thanks for the chapter boss!

Unwillingmainer

In a world of monsters, beasts, and the undead, humans will always be the worst demons around. Nothing like humanity's inhumanity. On more entertaining note, I love how Arthur's logic often boils down to I'm a dragon and so your argument is invalid.

Marvin bennett

Last i remember she was like 10/15 for the 4th

Marvin bennett

Is she on the 5th step yet?

David Gunger

Harrowing chapter, but thanks regardless!

Mecanimus

Aplogies for the delay. As you can imagine, this wasn't easy to write or research. Incidentally, the toddler feeding on the headless mother and the baby oven were real events that happened in Rwanda, if you must know. I really prefer researching insects and guns.

HJ

first!


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