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The Calamitous Bob 195: Changing the Ways

🕑 Added 2024-03-22 15:52:22 +0000 UTC

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Edit suggestions: and that is with that -> and it is with that head of Marruk’s soldier -> head of Marruk’s soldiers

M. Lampi

the kark were well on their ways to finish the cleanup. ==> the kark were well on their way to finish the cleanup. there wasn’t enough room for all of them on the ship, so most now the steel construct rode over the plains like a fat tank. ==> there wasn’t enough room for all of them on the ship, so now the steel construct rode over the plains like a fat tank. It was battered and mishappen, ==> It was battered and misshapen, As soon as Viv saw her opponent, he knew they wouldn’t win this one. ==> As soon as Viv saw her opponent, she knew they wouldn’t win this one. She was pretty sure he could have won in the end, by forfeiting, he allowed for a peaceful transfer of power. ==> She was pretty sure he could have won in the end; by forfeiting, he allowed for a peaceful transfer of power. His brow scrunched with efforts as his mind studied the proposal. ==> His brow scrunched with effort as his mind studied the proposal.

ItWasIDIO!!

I don't know counter ops should be a thing LOUD counter ops could be a funny thing

James Faulkner

Is there no chappie today?

M. Gunnarsson

The king of Baran will almost certainly never fight Viv, because if she dies, Arthur takes over a nation that borders on his.

Senko

Reminds of one town that shortly after motor cars became available passed a law that anyone planning to commit a crime using one had to submit written notice at least twenty four hours in advance so citizens could be kept out of the way.

Senko

So the Lutan assasins are about to become lunch. Tough call on the part of the Baran king. On the one hand he'd probably love to see Harrak humbled but given the nature of the event and limited scope of actions allowed by the alliance he might feel aiding Luten is too close to the same actions that got them in trouble. Interesting the council are only now learning of the actions that allowed this whole situation. I suspect whoever covered it up will be in trouble soon.

Graham Golder

I wonder if the kark follow human gods... Efestar might have a natural following here

Random

I wonder if writing surprise on a hand grenade before throwing it counts? They would have several seconds to be surprised

Bum-Sama

Ambush + overconfidence due to racial superiority complex equals military disaster. More heavies. The Black Tide Waxes.

NoReTr3aT

I bet. "Shield of Unity", "Wrath of the Forsaken", "Outcasts Hope" or "Layered Trust" could be cool names.

NoReTr3aT

Just put the signs around the kark land and it's fair game, lol.

DM

This calls for a cross over event! Hey if Marvel does it every summer…..

Kitty kat

You might need a little more downtime than just a week, mental and physical health don't care about your schedule! lol

Kitty kat

"It’s been a long week and I need to unwind." Translation: Somebody is about to have a Terrible, Horrible, No Good, Very Bad Day.

Mecanimus

I don't known what's wrong with me. Fixed.

Drew

Dark Blades are like an absolutely dominant state champion high school football team who are about to unknowingly play a game against a college national championship team in the Hadal.

Mantarok1205

Jolly good!

Steven C

Pretty Peak's grandma

Shiver Sheehan

Nestra’s ears popped out of sheer surprise. Wait, what’s the changeling doing there?! Cheers for the happy.

T'Ericka

😂😂😂💀

Trevor Mergen

Thanks looking forward to the next chapter!

StuBee3

Cool!

Diego Rossi

Thanks for the chapter. Waiting for the next, 164 hours to go. Sigh.

Diego Rossi

Truly. It seems more a ruler cornered by the actions of his predecessors and the prejudices of his people.

Lijwent

That shield will become an artifact at some point

tr13ze

Thanks for the chapter 😁

LenoraeKB

Arthur having access to invisibility seems like a recipe for no one in Param ever having a good night's sleep again.

lenkite

It would be nice if Arthur had an invisibility spell and comes out of stealth roaring: I STAB DARK BORGLING!

Isley

good chappie like always

lenkite

"Honestly, whatever could go through her magical shield would never, ever be stopped by that thin layer of metal" This is Factually in-correct. The [Anti-Magic Spider Spike] was stopped by this metal shield after it easily broke through her magical shield.

Andrew

Thank you!

BelligerentGnu

Hellow.

michael pigott

Baran joining on the pure leauge side would probably be the starting gun for Viv bringing out the literal artillery, also the golems. That would not end well for anyone but Harrack.

michael pigott

Suddenly: horror movie

Nathan Quitugua

If Baran knows whats good for them...they know enough to stay the eff out of her way when she goes on a war path because anything in front of her will be mowed down with extreme prejudice and copious amounts of black magic.

ARealPerson

Maybe they could put up a sign. "Past this point you might be assassinated at any time, you have been warned!"

LenoraeKB

Oh man I kind of hope the next chapter is a dark blade PoV as they slowly realize how fucked they are

Leviathon251

Thanks for the chapter!!

JHD

What about sending a message "we are going to kill you in your sleep." and then doing that a few days/weeks later. They whould be honourable assasins and if they do this succesfull a lot of times it would be a weapon of terror aswell.

Roombot

“I need to unwind” By killing assassins sent after her, hahaha!!

Bunny Waffles

So an ambush/assassination is fair game so long as you yell "SUPRISE!" before stabbing them in the throat?

MrMarauder

Here comes the storm.

The Uub

Ah, the dark blade assassins have arrived, and it seems they have caught the personal attention of the Empress.

Elie

Thank you for the chapter, it’s all beautifully done, how you highlight the difference between this conflict and the ones Viv witnessed so far. The glimpse we get of the Pure League shows that they’re not comically evil, have what appears to be level-headed rulers yet commit atrocities, certainly believing that they are entirely justified in their actions. Looking forward to how this will enfold.

Lucas beck

You called viv nestra near the end of marruks fight

Unwillingmainer

An army of steel clad Karks ambushing an unsuspecting army sounds like a good idea. Just gotta hope the enemy didn't get reinforcements from the biggest nation around, that also doesn't like Viv. Oh well, either way she has a dragon.

WarStrider72

Thanks for the chapter boss

Julian

(1).epub, I see this is not your first boogaloo.

Christopher McCoin

TFTC


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