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Changeling Part 34

🕑 Added 2024-02-06 17:37:14 +0000 UTC

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crownfall

I hope human nestra gets a core some day. it would be beautiful it was the very thing that causes the eventual falling out and reveal between her and her parents and her family accepting her in spite of it

Isley

good chappie

DaftWully

If we are going to get really technical, neither one is correct. K.E = 1/2*mass*velocity^2. Triple the velocity would be 4.5 times the kinetic energy. Or, it we are converting power to kinetic energy, K.E. = P*T. It you are tripling the power, but keeping the time the same, you are only tripling the kinetic energy.

Ecthe

"triple the power of the bullet. That means…” “Nine times the kinetic energy.” Don't you mean "triple the speed of the bullet" instead ? Kinetic energy and power are pretty much the same thing here.

Cormac

I did notice that too. Hmmm...

Einhander

She is fox mask. I'm pretty sure she mentioned something about "welcome to my den" during the art thing. I think she is more entertained that Nestra doesn't get it yet...

Clifton

I was thinking of her as self absorbed and knowing that no matter how our heroine burns herself she'll be fine. In that case it'd be a fun game until that happened.

Clifton

I was going with Asz - he.

Simca

He mentions Nestra's transformation within probable earshot (based on what we know so far) of her mom.

Specter

Thank you! The following seemed a bit off to me... since in the sentence before it talked about interviewing with multiple people instead of by herself maybe these sentences would be better focusing on doing investigative work for the first time since she lost Shinoda? Could work both ways "Also, Nestra hadn’t had a partner since Shinoda. Felt weird to go at it alone."

BrGustl

Ohh, I liked the talk with Seth. The reflection of her doings was very welcome.

Timothy Scott

I was very tentative about changeling. I was always so fond of journey that i had been unsure if i would like something new. I am extremely pleased to be wrong and find myself impressed and invested. I hope you continue to write this story for a long while yet, but even if you stopped tomorrow i have had a great time with it. I find your writing to feel well planned, i love where there story seems to be going. Thanks!

Mantarok1205

Jolly good!

c c

Gosh, Teneru is so suspicious. I wouldn't be interrogating the suspects with another variable there like Nestra is. Her reaction felt suspicious last chapter too, she's too willing and curious, acting more casual than she should if an off duty officer asked her to do dangerous things off the book.

Leviathon251

Yippee! Thanks for the chapter. Good to see Gorge is healthy again Poor little guy.

riseris

Sereth’s line at the end is like a warning bell. I don’t want you to die quickly?

Daryl McGuire

I stumble mentally over Aszhii. Is it pronounced like Ahh Zee or Oz Hee, or am I missing it entirely?

phantom

Other fiction: humans are such monster in the wider universe: This story: -sees humans with their power struggles and stuff- it is inspirational how caring they are.

Julia Kent

100%

phantom

That. is an interesting idea. Also there is something major she did not consider from the stone guy. The killer would recognize her. Unless that tiny reaction was faked there was no way the killer would not react to her coming but react to hearing of investigation.

NoReTr3aT

Can't wait for a chappy of human nestra going ham with her new shotty. Hopefully with a PoV reaction of her blowing giant holes in people.

Andrew

Thank you!

Jamarr

What are the chances that all the suspects were scared of Miss Teneru instead of Nestra's questions.

WarStrider72

Thanks for the chapter

Max

Thanks for the chappie


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