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Changeling Part 36

🕑 Added 2024-02-20 17:27:19 +0000 UTC

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M. Lampi

She didn't do anything with Stonegrave's core?

Ella Hughes

yessssssss excellent!!!!!!!

Matthew

That would’ve been psychotic lol

Leviathon251

Watched that movie twice. Still hat the annoying dog thing though lol.

Mecanimus

Will edit.

Mecanimus

"And I don't mean this poetically or metaphorically or any other fancy words. I am Death. Straight up." Possibly one of the greatest villains in a 'kids' show.

Mecanimus

I aim to retain great pacing.

Mecanimus

Dont forget the manic laugh

Mecanimus

Yep.

Mecanimus

I'll do an editing pass

Mecanimus

Exactly this.

Matthew

I clocked that too lol

TheBotler

Thank you for the chapter

sir-meepington

Range turned to surprise, *rage

DM

Wow so good. I’m actually going to miss Teneru. She became such a great villain.

Andrew

Thank you!

Leviathon251

OK that one was awesome. Was there a reference to death from puss in boots or am I crazy? I might just be seeing anyone listing long words as a reference now lol

Adam Davies

Great end to the hunt. Very satisfying. Thanks for not stretching it over multiple chapters like some authors would!

Clara

I'm expecting that there's a soft cap of sorts, probably at least in part because they can only steal affinities that they really resonate with

Specter

Thank you! We have the limelight tofor ourselves.” -> to/for She walked out into a tastefully sober alley -> hallway

sebsebs

Oooh thank you boss, you really delivered with this one ! The hunt was thrilling and it feels so complete with that finale... Thanks for the chapter PS: I can't help but imagine Nestra doing a victory dance and giggling while she savours her victory, a giant demon covered in blood twirling right next to gruesome corpses

I recommend Flatlander by Larry Niven. He talks a bit about challenge of writing a science fiction murder mystery in the forward. I thought about it as I was reading this.

Tsorov

Wasn't her hunt, so worthless in her mind. But that's just a theorie

Mantarok1205

VERY nice!

Anton Shomshor

TYFTC!

HJ

Wait a minute…. Does ‘second sphere’ mean second core? How many cores do Ashzii collect?

RottenTangerine

Thanks for the chapter!!

Jamarr

Demonic persona. If she was able to use these false cores in her human form she would have already. I think Seth might have already said its impossible to regrow the core in her mask.

Necrotyr

She didn't take the dudes core?

NoReTr3aT

Demon.

HJ

Watch some Dexter!! It’s perfect for ideas on murderers and police procedures.

NoReTr3aT

How it feels to chew 5 gum

Michael Booth

TFTC! EDIT: "We have the limelight tofor ourselves." should be "We have the limelight to ourselves."

Kriss

I kinda see that as an expression of her scornful crescent style. Its all about breaking her opponents rythm and this seems like a great way of doing that.

Enkelados

Enjoyed the chapter. Great finale for the arc. One question, the second orb, is that one she will have in human form or just another aspect in her demon persona?

Vincebourgh

Sad that she didn't take Teneru's eyes like she wanted her to. But I guess it would have looked weird to the police.

LenoraeKB

It's interesting how regularly she uses establishing then breaking a pattern in combat vs humans.

Rafnyd

TFTC! Oh, that was just wonderful. I loved that fight!

WarStrider72

Thanks for the chapter

Mecanimus

I need to read more police procedural.


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